Who is it we really See
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D. Enise
Wednesday, July 09, 2003
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To often we see by the use of our eyes.
Believing to trust in just what it is we "think" we "See"..
Music~
"If Tomorrow Never Comes"
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Just next door A fine old house With a landscaped yard, And white picket fence.
Stagnant the waters of the swamp seen by day, Infested with mosquitoes, And Trash, thrown away. Ignored, and passed by, With a scowl and a curse From the neighbor next door, Who lives in the house.
** The "crazy" old lady That walks down the street rambling, or shouting And to "whom", does she speak?
Adorning herself, In discards of others She cover's herself Layer, after layer's.
Pushing a shopping cart Filled with her life, packing it full, With this, and with that. ~*~ "Get out of my trash, Be on your way!" The shouting of those, On the streets that are paved.
~~~~ * ~~~~ He stands on the corner Toothless and frail He's missing an arm And reeks from a smell. ~*~ He's avoided, and shunned Told to head out, "Your disturbing my customers" The store owner, shouts! ~~~~~~~ * ~~~~~~~~ The heat of the day, The old wagon gives out The child in the back seat plays with a book.
The second lane over From the shoulder, and safety Stalled and steaming Old car on the freeway.
The young driver, determined. she has children to tend The hospitals not far?, It's just up ahead.
~*~ Men in suits, flashy red cars Convertible tops.. Sun, shinning warm.
Dark covered glasses, to cover the eyes, They say with a shout, As they drive right by..
"Get out of the way!" "I am late cause of YOU" You miserable pain!" Have you no clue?"
Women on cell phones Windows rolled up Pretend not see her, Never look up.
They drive on by With backwards vision, As they look in the mirror at the "horror/whore" in reflection
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With the fading of light,
As the day nears it's end, The sun sets at last
New visions, ahead.
As the darkness of night slowly awakens Revealing in shadows.. Where Sun Light, has blinded.
~*~ A soft warm glow From the light in the yard laughter and smiling The Barbeque on..
The stars and moon Reflecting and shine On the water, that shimmers off the lake, that's near by.
~Who would have thought?! ~*~ Gentle the lady, Ever so lovely in soft moons light She looks like an angel
She smiles sweetly down at a kitten Who purrs at her side. Snuggled in blankets.
~*~ ~Her son, her daughter,
She never knew. ~She was to young, to know what to do.
To raise children, When the love of, her life Had been killed on an Airplane.
While on his way, off to fight.
~Sweet mother of ?.. ~*~ On a bench in the park under street lights aglow A man touches a photo Worn and so old..
Years long ago Back in his youth With his whole life before him, Or so he had thought.
He no longer remembers
Most of his past
But the photo he knows,
all else had been lost.
Five young men smiling and laughing boarding a plane, All in uniform.
His Father, His Mother
His Wife & His Children
All were forgotten
When He lost his memory.
~Once A homecoming King~ ~*~ All is quiet, Dim light of the room, The nurse walks in, and checks the machines.
She touches the shoulder Of the young woman there And says "Have you eaten? You look so pale".
"You come every night, It's always the same So young was his life And he was so brave.
He still lays sleeping, after so many years.. Having given his life So others may live.
She touches the band That encircles her finger, And remembers the day she married her fireman. ~*~ She steps outside, Into the night A child in her arms And walks to the bus.
~Her father her, her mother She never knew,
her brother?, Her Sisters?, Adopted somewhere else too. ~~~**~~~ A man nods his head, as he passes her by, to get into his car That is Shinny and red.
He turns to look back, Towards the nurse that had called out to him,
Before he left.
"Doctor,.. wait!, you have forgotten, Here are your files, and your dark colored glasses."
~His father, his mother, He never knew. His sisters?
Adopted, somewhere else too.
~*~ He thanks her,
And he turns to go. While she turns away
And answers her phone.
~Her father, her mother, She never knew. Her Brother and sisters? Adopted, somewhere else too.
~*~ Copyright ~2002/2003 D.Enise All Rights Reserved
~Looks, can be deceiving. Any time, any place a "circumstance" "Can" Change a life.. a Place, "But".. so also can we, While we are able.
Least we remember, To not judge another, We have not walked in their shoes..
And we may never "know"..Who it "is"
we are "looking" at.. To "See" is to "look" with your heart....
Rewrite from an Earlier version
This piece is supposed to be in 4 line stanza's for the most part.
I can not get it to "show" lined up that way, even though in this editor it "IS"..??
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| Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook |
8/22/2003 |
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| So many great truths here in these mini-stories. And much food for thought. Thank you for this one! |
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| Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) |
7/10/2003 |
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I'm glad I stumbled onto this today.
What a wonderful piece.
Best of luck, from a fellow midwesterner...
-James |
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| Reviewed by The Bear Paw |
7/10/2003 |
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This is so excellent! Thank you for sharing such wisdom...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
7/10/2003 |
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this is a wonderful story/poem and filled with such truths, great emotions
this is wonderful, thanks for sharing |
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| Reviewed by Dove (Reader) |
7/9/2003 |
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{{{{{{{Jen}}}}}}}}}}
so glad you are posting, my friend..It shows you are "starting" to feel better....
Love you alot!!!
Jo |
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| Reviewed by Angelica Young |
7/9/2003 |
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Outstanding Write. Loved it Much!
Love Tearz |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
7/9/2003 |
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This was Outstanding, quite excellent,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
7/9/2003 |
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Excellent story
You did a wonderful job on the AD logo |
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| Reviewed by jaime |
7/9/2003 |
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your thoughts are as deep as mine. I am surprised to see you organize them so well... I hope this comes with age :)
much love mom. |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
7/9/2003 |
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Excellent thoughts and write, D.
Leland
P.S. For formatting have you tried to format in WORD, then cut/paste verbatim to AD? It seems to cure many editor ills for me. |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
7/9/2003 |
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7-9-03
EXCELLENT!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/9/2003 |
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| Outstanding poetry and art. You shine with this one D. |
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| Reviewed by Brittany Renιe |
7/9/2003 |
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You're a very remarkable woman to be able to do that picture and do this poem. Wonderful, D.Enise. You're very wise.
Warm Love
*Brittany Renee* |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/9/2003 |
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| so true; love this write! :) (((HUGS))) "who is it we really see" when we look at others??? good question! |
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