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|Reviewed by Charleen Burge (Reader)
|I disagree I think it is perfect, needs the adjectives, says it all.|
|Reviewed by Rheachel Smith
|flows well until the last line, maybe just the sword minus the adjectives? The rest is so succinct that the last line seems to disturb the rhythm. Or maybe that was on purpose.|