|Reviewed by Barbara Sue
|what an enjoyable poem from you two..oh, to be so young again, so innocent..thanks for this loveable poem collaboration|
|Reviewed by J M
|You two this is a duet of creativity and warmth a wonderful poem...
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|This is enchanting, good job You Two! You should write and publish a children's volume of poetry.|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|really well done-love the sweet reality of it|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|They can't say I love you, so...they give you a shove.
Inside the mind of the little ones, aren't we?
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is so sweet...thank you for sharing!!
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|What a sweet write, so child like and innocent. Love it.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|what a great write
wow, did this bring back memories from first grade.......
adorable job you two
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Rusty and CJ,
Adorable! That's just how it is. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Sharon Jordan
|You're so right. It's a strange way that boys and girls flirt. Hmmm. Does it ever change?
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|So true, so true...|
|Reviewed by Laura Mayer
|This is so adorable, with many truths in this write. You two are a dynamic team. Well done!
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|No, Rusty-friend, I'm the lucky one. You are a true professional -- our poems seem to write themselves when you're at the helm. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to write with you. You're the best.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|CJ and Rusty,
You have penned a beauty here; very well done! BRAVA! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|I sure remember those days...I could not understand back then but do now. HUGS|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Now you two shine in this department... what a wonderful complement you are for each other and I can see how this would work between you. It's amazing when the synergies just correspond. And I really can't discern which energies belong to whom in this well-crafted poem - the whole is seamless. Delightful narrative which is illuminating and sensitive and yet which also gives us an entire character sketch and scenario. So well-balanced - even with the fall! Love this and my warmest congratulations to you both. I hope this will be a partnership that will be repeated... it is gorgeously fruitful! :)) TY K xx|