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Went to hire the biggest shark
Learned this lesson from a mark:
If you dance with demons dark
better find an evil skhrkk!!
Read his story, what a lark!
Might and bite and lot's of bark
Tacky celebrity is his tease
Dominick is a Big Mac cheese!
In he came rotund and kind
Thought he knew me?
Centered in the moment’s rhyme
knew how to cast the line.
Said he was like a priest - it's true !
Always playing, such a view
Felt a moment out of time
Enjoying this ancient fiend of mine.
Has the measure of what’s true
Knows the ladies' are centered too
Most of life is quite askew
Can't be blue, fun is true !
Good to swim in Dominick’s wake
Feel protected, much at stake
Feeds the shark tight in his keep
Silent, focused, flashing, deep!
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|Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
|Your writing style varies greatly from piece to piece. I am impressed with your range and talent. Nicely crafted, with a light touch of humor. Well done!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing your wit, Tom. Best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|clevery written poem-very nice|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Glad to read this composition. It has that wit-wise fragrance.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|I enjoyed the rhythm and the rhymes in this poem. Great job!
Sandie May Joyce