|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|Our thoughts become things -- there, you found such beauty and peace and love, thinking you would stay if you could -- and the universe made it so. What a wonderful poem and story!
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Very well composed, Tom|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
Amazing write, profound and thought provoking.
|Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
|Oh Tom, did you really live within earshot of crashing waves, omigosh I am so jealous! I love being near the water, going fishing, and is it warm there? It is snowing sleeting and icy cold here, and I hae it. I want to sit on your balcony!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A profoundly thought-inciting write, Tom. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Having all the riches in the world does not make one happy. Too sad but true. I too would love an oceanside home, but finances make it not available. Only some dreams and readings of it can be had by me about that ocean life I'd like to lead.|
|Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
|Were not always aware of our journey, until we look back.
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|Wow, this is very thought-provoking about the self and the journey we are all on-very tight, well-written piece.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Amazing how and when we really learn to see and then absorb it all in to become a part of who we are, lovely writing...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
for me this is a personal epiphany, a rejection of your old order and acceptance, and the search for a higher consciousness which this poem tells me you've found partially at least, partially I think is what's achievable, nirvana is elusive but never to be given up on.
I love where you take me with this.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|this is sad-i hope he found his way back|