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| Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly |
10/10/2006 |
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| Everything's right about "What's Wrong," a very delightful and enjoyable prose. Made me laugh and me cry; hope you find your beau. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/9/2006 |
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climb the mountain someone left for you, pay the bills that were delivered to you, love you can only find by yourself ...
i enjoyed the logic and concept of this poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Unnur Bragadóttir |
10/9/2006 |
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| My holy. Thank you so much for your support. You have given me such a treasure, such a feed back - May every minute sing for you in silent. I know of course my English must be a bit clumsy, but what´s perfect in life? Thank you, thank you. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
10/9/2006 |
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I know that of which you speak! Great poem...
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
10/9/2006 |
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| Funny and beautiful at the same time, Unnur! I am a big fan of snow and the scandinavian countries so this poem fell like a crystal into my lap. Best wishes kenny |
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| Reviewed by Rusty Daily |
10/9/2006 |
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| Keep writing poetry like this and soon that someone wil find you. |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/9/2006 |
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Welcome to Authors Den
I like your poem,
good observations
keep looking.........maybe he is under that snow, and you will find him come the spring thaw
pax A |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
10/9/2006 |
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| Such a plea. Great build up to it too. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/9/2006 |
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Aaaawwwww! I think the man will be here very soon!!!!!...Just seek and yee shall find!!!!!
Wonderful write!!!!!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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