by Leanna D McNabb
Thursday, October 26, 2006
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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I never wanted to knock the way people deal.
I did only because denial got the best of me.
I had, no, have a problem that is very real.
It took me a couple miserable years to see.
Fortunate as I am, I can't get over feeling wasted.
This life, to me, seems so pointless and too real.
If it were up to me, I wouldn't have ever faced it.
I could've gone without love, hate, and the way it makes me feel.
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|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|I enjoy reading your poetry and I hope I can read more of your poetry in the future :-),take care
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
A heartfelt welcome to you, and thank you for sharing.
Yes, George is correct~besides it surely never hurts to try!
Blessings of peace and joy to your heart.
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|You're alive and still ticking and not all tomorrows will find you in a depressed state. Keep writing, it gets rid of the feelings of guilt and self doubt you may be experiencing. Pick up your Bible and read Job. He had unsurmountable problems also.|