by Gilles G Marchand
Thursday, February 20, 2003
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Well this is a try at the Erotica game.
I hope you enjoy, for those who feel that I went a little too far, Well I'm sorry, but the body and mind has it's place in life! I welcome all comments! Cheers!
I arrived at the motel room early in the after noon, your going to meet me there later. I begin by setting the mood for the room. I brought along a C.D.player so that we could have a little music and also plenty of candles. I wanted the ambience to be perfect!
Time was approaching, so I lit the candles and put on a little music, nothing to heavy, just a little blues.
I heard a knock at the door,I knew it was you. I had butterflies in my stomach...! I open the door and my eyes met yours, we both had huge smiles. You then cam in and I offered you a glass of wine, we toasted,
"there were no need for words,only smiles..."We sit and began to chat
for awhile, the music was over so I then got up from my chair, and change the cd. I then decided to put on music of the Kama Sutra, to change the mood a little more.The music began and I walk over to you and gently moved your hair from the back of your neck and kissed you.
You then looked at me and asked what type of music was playing? I said;
music of the body and soul, just feel it with your body...
You then get up from your chair, and turned to me. We looked deep into each others eyes. My hands, gently touching your face, your lips...
We begin to kiss, our taste for our lips are very passionate. I begin to make my way around your neck, kissing with my lips, tasting with my tongue and nibbling...breathing is getting more intense.
We remain standing, facing each other, as the music sways our body's and
feeding our souls...feeling it as were feeling each other. Your lips taste of hunger that I am willing to die for! Tongues teasing...dancing a tango of snake charms...my hands make their way to the curves of your body, your lower back, as they slide to your thighs, cupping you in my hands...I bear one of your shoulders, tasting it's flesh with my moisten lips.Your bearing your neck even more to me,wanting me to take what life you are giving...!
I'm beginning to moan at the secret moon that is hidden within the sky, my body, begins to heat with passion, lust...Ooh...my body feels like it wants to cry out loud...! Hummmm...yes...your lips are finding my breast, teasing with your tongue...Ooh...God...taste them...!
I'm telling you with my mind, with my body Ooh...I throw my head back, bearing more and more of me, letting you find your way to my nipples...
The music is lulling my soul...ooh hummmmmm...your tongue is leaving a trail of passions fire and your lips...Oohhhh...your lips...
I then look into your eyes, telling only with my eyes to unzip my dress. I want you to feel me,to see me...to take me home Oohhh...!
I then begin to kiss you with desire again, wrapping my arms around you
and start to pull your shirt out of your jeans.Your kissing my neck,then I feel your hands in the center of my back, slowly, you unzipped me all the way down...chills of desire were going thru my body!
I couldn't hold back any more, I wanted flesh! I took his shirt off
bearing his well sculpt upper body, hummmm...a chest that I want to devour my lust from...! ooohhh yes...the way he's kissing me around my neck and tasting my ear, oh my...his breath on my flesh...Ooh..babe...
my nipples are calling to the heavens and wanting to be sucked by you...
Yes babe...!I'm becoming so moist...!
My dress fall's freely to the floor. We stopped just for a moment...
wanting you to look at me, wanting you, to want me...! You have this grin on your face like a snake getting ready for it's pray, but the look in your eyes,were almost of heaven...I then ask you to take my bra off, but with your teeth! ooh babe...that did not take long...!
It was only fair, the both of us bearing our flesh, and besides, my nipples wanted to breath his lustful lips!
Ooh...God...! my body feel's like it's on fire when he touches me there!
Touching and kissing, pulling me closer to you. My nipples brushing against your hard body, feeling you grow harder each time you pull me to you...! Your hands made their way to my swollen firm breast, Ooh YeS!
Your fingers are tasting my rose buds sending shocks to my volcanic terrain...Yes...your lips feel as moist as I do...Ooh god...take me further!!!!
As my lips savor her swelling mammilla's, my hands felt her firm breast...she is moaning more as the snake awakens. Beads of sweet nectar begins to form as the music and heat take charge...!My tongue thirst for your flesh...from the drops of ecstasy from your soul...Oh God baby...your pinching and pulling my nipples as if they were tied to my unbending wand!God I am so swollen that I just want to ooh baby...
I pull you closer to me, as our songs become loader and loader, we begin to grind a little, I'm wanting to feel the heat between your thighs with my phallus of fire seeking for it's home...ooh babe you say, as I rube la place d'amour...your hands lower to the front of my jeans and undo the top button and then slide my zipper all the way down...you didn't have to reach very far though, it was a Jack in a Box! You took a firm grip of my magic wand and could not believe...Ooh babe yes...! You went!
She then made her way with her lips down to my valley, biting, sucking...her nipples left a trail of flames as they slide down my flesh. Ooh baby...! oh that feel's good...! You are performing as if you were playing a flute, knowing every note, every key ooh,mmmm...
The way that your humming with me in your mouth, those notes, are resonating to my soul Ooh God! Not Yet...! Baby, come back up here. You slide up my body just like a snake! Feeling me and brushing me, teasing with your tongue and your nipples still hard and taunting...!
I see in your eyes, that you wish to go further. I give you a slight grin to acknowledge that I am,to worship the Goddess...I grip your hair
from behind and tug slightly, to have you look up to the moon...!
Bearing your neck, your flesh...your soul...I begin with your lips...
feeling them with my tongue, tasting with my lips, down to your chine, your neck...tasting both sides of your beautiful neck...I give you one last love bite, you tilt your head slightly and moaned;Ooh...babe...
I leave a trail of hot passion with my tongue. Like a snake tasting the air, I want to taste you completely! Your shoulders, your arms...I suck
each finger you have...then back up to your shoulders...I inch my way to your wonderful breast, your buds welcome me, wanting to feed me with all of your desires...I can't get enough! I'm like the starving child, and you bear them fully to me! ooh God you taste so good...!
I must leave here and find my way to the love canal. as my tongue continues to taste, my hands and fingers feel your sexual body. Ooh...!
Your lips had found my fingers, and you begin to suck them...mmmm...baby your mouth is beautiful...I circle her navel with my tongue and kiss it so gently, I rub my cheek against it, to thank her belly for life...I am now at her panties...I stop for just a moment and look up at her, I smile...She's not here, but she is...!
I then peel her red petite panties off with my mouth, exposing her cache d'amour. I spread her leg's slightly, wanting to explore all that is hidden...! I notice her sweetness exudes, from her joie de vivre!
Wanting to feed me even more...!
Ooh babe...my body is cold and yet on fire! My nipples are so hard, that it feel's like they want to pull off of my teats! ooh...baby...your down there now ooh...every nerve in my body is alive! Mmmmmmm I'm so wet
I feel it running down my leg's...! Oohmmm your kissing me on the inside of my thigh...mmmmohmmmm your touching nerves that are making me quiver Oohhh...Yess... yes baby touch me there! Your spreading my moist lips so gently with your fingers, exposing my love canal...Ooh...your tongue is caressing each lip, tasting the insides of me, back and forth...just teasing around my love bud, OOOOoohhh Goddd
Yess..you've found my spot and you know it! You wrapped your arms around me, grabbing my ass and pulling me closer into your face, to get your tongue deeper within me...Yesss....oooohhhyesss......Ooh God, your french kissing me, sucking my juices and dancing with your tongue!
OOhhhGod yes! YeS! YESSS! yesss!!! Ooh God your sucking my clit yes...
Oohhhhh....I'm there...!!! OOhhh...he's pulling me more into OOOHH GGOOODD his face!!!Yes...!YEss! YES!!! FUCK YES!!!!
Ooh God...baby, my legs are shaking so much...!
I'm breathing so heavy...ooh babe, come here...He takes his tongue and slithers it all the way up...! I have this huge smile on my face and so does he. I looked down and seeing his hard full penis!
I wrapped my hands around this firm fire wand. Wanting to taste it again! He then whispered into my ear; So, do you want to fuck me...?
Ooh Babe, do I ever!!!
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|dammit I am speechless.....and.????
no more breath left....only a fish could make love like that
|Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)
|Whew! Kama Sutra for all!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Double, Triple Ohh La La. Must be the French in you. Hot stuff, Gilles.|
|Reviewed by Beach Chic
|A sizzling passionate write! That last question was a loaded one ya know lol Hot!|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Super hot write...you're sizzling now!!! :)|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|WHOA!!!!!.....You blue-eyed fish.....this is hot!!!!!!.....
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|You play with the fire of passion in a wonderful teasing way. Hot write!|
|Reviewed by Buddy Angel
|Wow, SUPER HOT !!!|
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
|ssssss.....hot!!!! You have heated up the afternoon with this "Fire"...don't stop burning!|