A showering Gift
by Gilles G Marchand
Monday, February 24, 2003
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Another little tale from the other side...! I'm just trying to flesh out
with my writings...I hope you enjoy!
A showering Gift
I was taking a shower at the time. Just me, the suds and the water...
Then all of a sudden, you ask if you could join me? And I said; Come on in Baby! You are so beautiful, just seeing you in my mind, give me an erection...! You asked me to wash myself in front of you, and, of course I did! You began to kiss me, touching me...hummmm...well it did not take very long to get me aroused...! Still kissing me,you said; what
would you do for me...? Well I'm standing in the shower with her and now
in the heat of desire! I said; Anything Baby, anything for my Goddess...
Then you asked; do you want me...?
Oh God yes Baby! I will do anything for you...
You took my hands and placed them on my phallus and told me to work it baby, work it up for me...and so I did...! You helped me though...kissing me and sucking my nipples...at times biting them!
You look down and see that I'm at full staff and then make your way down... I go to take my hands away and you said NO! Keep doing it...!
I want my gift...and I said, what gift with a grin?
The one that you have given no other...no other I went?
Well, did you not say that you will do anything for me...? Yes I did
and I will...!O.K. then your going to give me the largest pennis that
you will ever have now, just for me, your Goddess, and you will
do what I will tell you...you are to please me...? So work it while
I put your head in my mouth...
She got on her knees and began to taste it with her tongue...and then slowly insert my head within her mouth...
God, what a feeling!!! So here I am polishing the Staff, with her gently sucking my head with her hands cupping my genitals...
Ooh...Baby...that feels good...hummmm...you then stopped for just a second and looked up at me and asked; are you full yet Baby...?
And I said; God, it's hard!!! She then said; I want it harder and I
want it harder now...!
She returned back to business but now she added a hum...with the sucking...but the sucking was getting stronger...!she would suck and
pull it out of her mouth, it would almost make me pull back!
It felt like she was trying to suck the head off! God, it feels great!
My legs are beginning to shake a little. Almost pain,but it's bringing
alive! Harder Baby she would say, harder...!
I would stop with my hands and she would say NO! Keep doing it...!
I want my gift and you will give it to me now!
She wanted me to work it harder and faster, as I'm doing this, she
would moan...and the more she'd moan, the more crazy I got!
She would say, bigger Baby, bigger hummm...
She then looked up at me with her eyes, with me still in her mouth...
I could almost read her mind that something else was coming...
She then opened her mouth wide and showed me her teeth! And then
she began to rake my Staff with her teeth...! God, what a pain
of pleasure, I've never been so hard in my life! She would go deep
on my Staff and rake only to the head, and then she would suck the
head and back deep again...Ooh Baby! What a feeling! Harder , she would say! Fuck, I can't get any harder...! She would still say, harder Baby...harder...! God, I was almost ready to explode!
So then, she took one of her hands and put it behind me, pulling me closer to her...My eyes are rolled into the back of my head. feeling not being in the here and now, feeling as if I'm floating on an energy force...! I looked down at her...God, I have not been here!
She is still raking with her teeth and sucking harder...Oh God...!
Harder she is still saying!!! She looks up again with her eyes, I could
tell that she was smiling...as she is still doing this to me and wanting it harder. She could sense that I'm getting ready to erupt...!
She then said one more time loud, HARDER!!! And then she inserted her
middle finger in me, pulling me, to not escape...! FUCK!!! I yell...!
Blowing every bit of life out of me, into her mouth...!
My legs shook so much, I could barely stand!
She then got up and smiled and said; Thank you Baby, it's the best
gift I ever had...! Only for you baby, no other...
I said exosted...!
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|Reviewed by author
|Wow! Inserted her finger in you. You The Man!
Bully and the Boys at the Penitentiary.
|Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
|You spelled exausted wrong, lol. but after reading that story who the heck cares... this was hot ouch!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I am Up tight now....wow!!!
Speechless again........I think you need another shower......lol
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|LOL Moon Flower :-) Gilles you have outdone yourself in this one. The full passion explodes in your words that build up the pressure from the begining to the release in the end. Hot write.|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
Your words are "HOT" "HOT" "HOT"
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Yea flesh out :)
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Dayum you're feeling froggy today. Calm down boy!!!
Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|That's quite a shower!!!!! But be careful, some fishies get eaten up with sharp teeth