|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Deeply and profoundly written, good script and action galore.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Cannons
thought I'd drop by and say HI, looking forward to creating mayhem in roundtable with you......if that still happens seems very tame these days ;D
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Powerfully written... blessings, Holly|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I am drawn to the water, this poem grabbed my attention to realize that the water is home to some very brave souls.
Thank you for this aquatic poem! Really loved your words.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" Moonstone
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|AND extracted themselves and their objective...
Excellent write Doc...from one who knows
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Excellent, strong to the point it vibrates in our bones while we read it (well, you know...)We really liked it!
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|Forceful and mission-minded. Glad to see a post. Cheers|
|Reviewed by Peter Benson
|Powerful, but polish it.
Just as I got into the fine line rythmn and the "found such to be true" you change the whole structure. Actually, to be forward here, I'd combine the last two stanzas and make them the first.
...we, Poseidon's legions,
the razor tips of his great trident
we were to be feared.
Then you can remark on those who "found such to be true."
Just a suggestion.
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|A commanding and forceful tribute to an elite group. Excellent. R|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|awesome tribute-well written|
|Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk
|Great tribute for the Navy Seals...Hugs, Peggy|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Navy seals are are very dedicated, rare breed of man. Too often kept hidden in the background never to receive the devotional praise they so duly deserve. Your piece brings this out and I thank you.....