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Pauper and the Prince
by Jo Jack

Monday, February 26, 2007
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This poem was written by my best friend in memory of our dear friends passing.




We sung ‘Amazing grace,
How sweet the sound,’
As you lay cold and still
In your unpaid shroud.

The ills of life
Have passed away,
But still remained
This debt unpaid,
As we lowered you
Down the barren tomb,
A redundant ugly
Motherless womb.

A pauper’s funeral
Lacks all grace,
But in the last few hours
You ran the race.
Yet remained the question
Of silver or gold.
But your debt was cancelled
With the Prince’s gold.


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Reviewed by Sharon Lawson 2/28/2007
I sense the joy of Heaven. Funerals are bleak affairs and despite the gloom and sadness, there is great comfort knowing where your loved one is now. This poignant poem is rather uplifting in a sense. Despite the blackness the mourners feel, the deceased feels nothing but great joy!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 2/26/2007
So very sad, sorry about your friend. Rich or poor, earthly possessions are meaningless in God's house.Will keep you in my prayers this night.
Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 2/26/2007
so much here
sadness
reality
and the picture speaks volumes as well
i agree a moving tribute
peace
Reviewed by Tactfully Naive 2/26/2007
As we lowered you
Down the barren tomb,
A redundant ugly
Motherless womb.

A compellingly vivid image of detachment of all that is important in a person's life: to be loved, wanted and made to feel adequate.

One would like to think that your friend triumphantly burst through the finishing tape by the skin of a single heartbeat like the rest of us who have and are still running the race.
In the light of this belief, his shroud may be unpaid for by earthly gilt, but the shroud of his sins are surely paid in full by the sacrifice of Christ.

A moving tribute to a man you have kindly elavated to a prominent plinth of integrity.

Regards
Dai
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