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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/15/2005 |
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| the real adventure is in writing a poem so that all can join along on its poetic journey ... i felt i was on a safari in this poem ... very nice thoughts! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
12/15/2005 |
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| OMG.. I just use words that sound good to me.. From the word verb onwards you lost this boy... |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
12/15/2005 |
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We honestly can agree as an AD family of writers:
How hard, oh hard desperately hard those words are to come by sometimes. But we never give up. Loved this Sis. Eileen!
blessin's (and by the way, the character in my "Exhibitions" story has nothing to do with you. . . the name Eileen just came to me. Wanted to set the record straight on that since you are NOTHING like that crazy money-grubbing midlife golddigger in the story sequence.)
cynth'ya |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
12/15/2005 |
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| My goodness gracicious I love this! Really tight, Eileen. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
12/15/2005 |
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Words are powerful indeed. And I must say, the most wonderful times I've ever had has been while reading someones literary adventure. Thank you Eileen for sharing your words with us.
Carmen :-) |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
12/15/2005 |
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You always take us on your poetic adventures Eileen...always wonderful
Carole...love and peace |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
12/15/2005 |
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| The firey artwork illustrates your lush words so well, Eileen! Writing can become both a fuelling and intoxicating drug and a blessed release; we can immerse and lose ourselves or we can find ourselves. We can build up and tear down, as the Bible so aptly says. We can fantasise or be totally and nakedly real. Such a wonderland coupled with an awesome responsibility of duty and care, it seems to me. But ADVENTURE it certainly is, and you are always a premier frontiersman cutting the trail ahead of the rest of us in terms of the vast amounts of ground you cover and explore. Just wish I could lose myself there in Tahiti for a bit..!! Yes, Christmas-phobia is settin in already... :)) TY LOL Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
12/15/2005 |
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| yes Eileen it's an adventure, great reflect on what we do. peace and love G |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
12/15/2005 |
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| Yes ... and your creations are always exciting and meaningful adventures! Thank you, Poet! |
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| Reviewed by Dan Rains |
12/15/2005 |
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Wonderful write. I enjoyed this.
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/15/2005 |
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Eileen,
You got that right. And what an adventure this poetry road has taken me on...I wouldn't trade it for the world! Awesome, awesome write, from a master wordsmith. :)
(((HUGS))), love and Merry Christmas, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
12/15/2005 |
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I've never thought of meself as
a poet, but you sure are. |
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| Reviewed by Janet Parker |
12/15/2005 |
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| So true, Eileen and cleverly written. I really love Gauguin's painting. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/15/2005 |
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Yes ma'am, an adventure it is! Wonderful write, always a joy to read ya, Eileen!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Daddy/baby update: Daddy is doing better (but he is still weak), and the baby is out of the ICU! He is doing better, too! God be thanked! Still keep 'em in your prayers! Thanks a lot! :D |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
12/15/2005 |
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Ahhh the clever workings of a poetic mind...onto which path will they wonder today? Sometimes it is simply a word heard that kicks the write into the moment. I admire those who keep pen and paper handy all the time so that when the muse speaks they can take heed. Me, I just allow it to amuse me then forget it when I try to put it onto a page...sighs...when will I ever become a serious writer?
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/15/2005 |
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Well done Eileen!!
Adventure of the poetical mind can be VERY fulfilling...nice!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
12/15/2005 |
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| Nice poetical hodgepodge of word you strung together for us today. Don't get the photo. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/15/2005 |
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| And May Your Adventure Continue, Tiger Lily. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
12/15/2005 |
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Its an addictive adventure you wouldnt want to miss...
With the power of words we create...and recreate our lives and world...that awesome power must be centered and focussed on bringing light and goodness into the hearts and souls of as many people we can reach or touch... now and in the future.
You are one of the foremost poets Eileen in broadcasting enlightenment through your favored pen.
Love
Peter |
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