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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
10/20/2006 |
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| Magnificent photograph and the poem does it justic, swirling lines full of menace and danger. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/19/2006 |
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| This poem certainly has Va-va-voom of the portentous kind, Eileen... Unique and spicily alliterated to get the veins voluminous! Great spin on Halloween here, causing us to consider the inter-relationships and deeper relevence and implications of "innocent" evils. Most astutely crafted. K xx |
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| Reviewed by Richard Hiebner |
10/19/2006 |
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Nice
Don't know what else to say
Nice |
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| Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett |
10/19/2006 |
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| This picture is just lovely and it makes me want to hit the road and take a long well deserved trip. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
10/19/2006 |
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| Thrill me . . . Kill me . . . Well, kinda . . . Titillate me . . . You did all three with this offering, Eileen . . . The killing part was the depth with which your words grabbed me . . . Good. |
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| Reviewed by S J (Reader) |
10/19/2006 |
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A "Voluptuous Vortex" indeed! And If that there picture were any larger on my screen, I would be running away!
Most excellent poetry, Eileen!
Thank you,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/19/2006 |
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Nice, Eileen. I'm terrified of severe storms/tornadoes, and this one will feed my nightmare machine...........GAD this is chillingly illustrated and penned!!!!!!!!!! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
And I concur with Karen: a cloud like that ever comes here, we'll be moving in with YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Hale |
10/19/2006 |
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Oh my, ET. If your aim was to scare, I must admit you succeeded!! <grin> Excellent write!
Peace. Joyce |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/19/2006 |
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Oh my I agree with Karen on this one sis!!
Haunting!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/19/2006 |
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Wonderful write, Eileen, but if I ever see a cloud like that here in Texas, I am LEAVING! Yikes! BRAVA; very well done as always!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Miss Pandora |
10/19/2006 |
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| Oh ...what a stunning composition. Superb alliterations here that create quite a forceful piece when all combined with the pace and clever descriptions. As for the pic...don't think I have ever seen anything quite that striking. Wonderful work Minx - I was blown away ;) Love Impx |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/19/2006 |
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| Love the "V"ocabulary on this one...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
10/19/2006 |
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What a photo!! And your words aptly paint its picture as well.. nicely done!
Myrna |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
10/19/2006 |
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Eileen
You have penned a highly visual and dynamic construct that does both Halloween and the Universe proud..
A double whammy of epic proportions..
And you always obtain the most thrilling graphics..
Blessings
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
10/19/2006 |
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| Great visuals Eileen. Really Enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
10/19/2006 |
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| UH-OH, NO WHERE TO GOOOO.. Never realised tornadoes can be so big!! |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
10/19/2006 |
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Breathtaking Eileen.
Yikes!
Awesome.
John |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
10/19/2006 |
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An adult haunting for the Halloween what a unique idea. I always think about Halloween from a child's point of view, but to be honest, that stuff doesn't scare me anymore, however...your poem does. Nice work, Eileen, you have taken Halloween's haunting to a new level.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
10/19/2006 |
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What an unbelievable photograph! No wonder you were drawn to describe it! WOW. You captured the essence well, and with your ownspecial talent your creativity ran away with it. Well done, Eileen!
Love,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by Rusty Daily |
10/19/2006 |
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Has to be one of the most descriptive poems I've ever read, and quite eerie.
Rusty |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/19/2006 |
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| That's one scarey looking cloud cover and an equally descriptive write to get in the Halloween mood. |
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| Reviewed by J M |
10/19/2006 |
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Very creative and most powerful piece this one imagination gives the poetess power... Of quill :)
Love & Light,
Joselyn |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
10/18/2006 |
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| Great poem. Picture looks like a monster ready to swallow a prey. GBQ |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
10/18/2006 |
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A true monster in the making
The beast from the abyss waiting
to be released
Thanks ...Eileen
William
Love & Peace |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/18/2006 |
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| this is a vortex that really reels you in ... it puts an entirely different perspective on halloween ... extravagant imagery that excites the imagination ... |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
10/18/2006 |
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| and there's nowhere to hide.....chilling poem, ET. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
10/18/2006 |
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Wow! That picture is something else.
Good verse too.
Elizabeth |
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