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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
10/30/2008 |
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Dear Eileen,
You weave magic into every poem . . . superlative my friend!!
Hugs,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/16/2008 |
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| I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
6/7/2008 |
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Oh, Eileen! This... it is superb! The message and writing brought me close to tears. Well done!
Cryssa
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/2/2008 |
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... and God will quench your thirst,,, Moving Write!!!!!
Love, Christine |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/1/2008 |
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| excellent metaphor beautifully presented ... |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/1/2008 |
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I see of dead dreams their empty carcass, not only a beautiful metaphore but a reality for many.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
6/1/2008 |
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| super versing Eileen, love the flow and feel of this great verse, it truly gave me a thrill, hugs :-) |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
5/31/2008 |
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| Sounds just like Aussie...:) Metaphorically speaking of course. but the deeper message is rendered loud and clear. :) Nice one Eileen. Hugszz CH'erie |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
5/31/2008 |
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...most beautiful work Eileen...to touch the hand of God...and know the waters of eternity...are within reach.
John |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/31/2008 |
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Perfect ending to this one
with love
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
5/31/2008 |
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| In the presence of omnipotence. A beautiful metaphor Eileen God bless. JMW |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
5/31/2008 |
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nice metaphor, eileen!
a pleasure, as always,
peace,
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
5/31/2008 |
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Beautiful poem your final stanza
Tells that true wisdom can be found
And it can only come from God
Stunning imagery and flow
Brilliant inspiring write!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugesss too....Morning Star
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
5/31/2008 |
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| This is so beautfiul...and the last line...exquisite. |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
5/31/2008 |
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| What a story, what an ending!!! Perfect! |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
5/31/2008 |
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| you had me gripping the arms of my chair....thank you for the last line...whew |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/31/2008 |
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| The relief in the final single line is as the pouring of the streams of living water into the Valley of Dry Bones for certain sure... think good ol Ezekiel would like this one! :)) The sense of parch-ment is sustained and intense. Strong images. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
5/31/2008 |
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He is The Way and The Light, and nourishes our needs. This is a wonderful, inspiring poem, Eileen! Kudos, friend...
Blessings and Love to you ~~ Micke |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/31/2008 |
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Beautiful write, Eileen; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/31/2008 |
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| Good as always to have a strong faith; He will keep you from being thirsty...ed |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
5/31/2008 |
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| Very well constructed, a thinking piece . . . I was of the opinion that you were merely talking about the wastland that America is rapidly approaching, but I should have realized the kicker would be what it was . . . Good . . . |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/31/2008 |
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And God takes my hand - beautiful, needed comfort - thank you, Eileen - another keeper you've penned! Inspired/inspiring - thank you, again -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/31/2008 |
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I'm sure I'm not the first to say this, ET, but you are a Psalmist.
Beautifully written. - Gene. |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
5/31/2008 |
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Yes ... true wisdom comes down from the Father
Blessings |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/31/2008 |
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| Enjoyed very much sweet lady..stay safe and well...Hugssss |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
5/31/2008 |
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| Jesus, or Muhammad in the parched desert, are you Eileen, and what will you tell us, besides suffering from exhaustion and thirst, come now you must have had a vision, being so near with God taking your hand, I thought only Jersey did that kind of stuff, ah, just kiddin my sweet. Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/31/2008 |
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| Quite a tale, and quite an ending, Tiger Lily. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/31/2008 |
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| i love the metaphores here-or are they analogies--anyway-i enjoyed this |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
5/31/2008 |
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| You have found what you seek for this poem has much wisdom and we can all drink from it. Thank you my friend for sharing. Love, Bonnie |
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