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A Dry and Thirsty Land
by E T Waldron
Saturday, May 31, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I awake in the desert in a dry
and thirsty land...

I long for the water of wisdom
I cry out for one drop of
knowledge...

The sun burns me with the
desire to know truth...

My lips are caked with the dry
sands of the unknown...

I yearn for a tree of answers
to sit under...

I see the dead carcass of
unfulfilled dreams...

I stumble over the bones of
unanswered questions...

I shout for a breeze of clarity
to relieve my hunger...

I sink into the sands of sorrow
clutching for sanctity...


And God takes my hand.

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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 10/30/2008
Dear Eileen,

You weave magic into every poem . . . superlative my friend!!


Hugs,

Lance
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 10/16/2008
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Cryssa C 6/7/2008
Oh, Eileen! This... it is superb! The message and writing brought me close to tears. Well done!
Cryssa
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 6/2/2008
... and God will quench your thirst,,, Moving Write!!!!!
Love, Christine
Reviewed by jude forese 6/1/2008
excellent metaphor beautifully presented ...
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/1/2008
I see of dead dreams their empty carcass, not only a beautiful metaphore but a reality for many.

Georg
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 6/1/2008
super versing Eileen, love the flow and feel of this great verse, it truly gave me a thrill, hugs :-)
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 5/31/2008
Sounds just like Aussie...:) Metaphorically speaking of course. but the deeper message is rendered loud and clear. :) Nice one Eileen. Hugszz CH'erie
Reviewed by John Leko 5/31/2008
...most beautiful work Eileen...to touch the hand of God...and know the waters of eternity...are within reach.
John
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 5/31/2008
Perfect ending to this one
with love
Ron
Reviewed by Jon Willey 5/31/2008
In the presence of omnipotence. A beautiful metaphor Eileen God bless. JMW
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 5/31/2008
nice metaphor, eileen!
a pleasure, as always,
peace,
carolyn
Reviewed by Morning Star 5/31/2008
Beautiful poem your final stanza
Tells that true wisdom can be found
And it can only come from God
Stunning imagery and flow
Brilliant inspiring write!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugesss too....Morning Star
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 5/31/2008
This is so beautfiul...and the last line...exquisite.
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 5/31/2008
What a story, what an ending!!! Perfect!
Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg 5/31/2008
you had me gripping the arms of my chair....thank you for the last line...whew
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/31/2008
The relief in the final single line is as the pouring of the streams of living water into the Valley of Dry Bones for certain sure... think good ol Ezekiel would like this one! :)) The sense of parch-ment is sustained and intense. Strong images. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 5/31/2008
He is The Way and The Light, and nourishes our needs. This is a wonderful, inspiring poem, Eileen! Kudos, friend...
Blessings and Love to you ~~ Micke
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/31/2008
Beautiful write, Eileen; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 5/31/2008
Good as always to have a strong faith; He will keep you from being thirsty...ed
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/31/2008
Very well constructed, a thinking piece . . . I was of the opinion that you were merely talking about the wastland that America is rapidly approaching, but I should have realized the kicker would be what it was . . . Good . . .
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/31/2008
And God takes my hand - beautiful, needed comfort - thank you, Eileen - another keeper you've penned! Inspired/inspiring - thank you, again -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 5/31/2008
I'm sure I'm not the first to say this, ET, but you are a Psalmist.
Beautifully written. - Gene.
Reviewed by richard cederberg 5/31/2008
Yes ... true wisdom comes down from the Father
Blessings
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 5/31/2008
Enjoyed very much sweet lady..stay safe and well...Hugssss
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 5/31/2008
Jesus, or Muhammad in the parched desert, are you Eileen, and what will you tell us, besides suffering from exhaustion and thirst, come now you must have had a vision, being so near with God taking your hand, I thought only Jersey did that kind of stuff, ah, just kiddin my sweet. Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/31/2008
Quite a tale, and quite an ending, Tiger Lily.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 5/31/2008
i love the metaphores here-or are they analogies--anyway-i enjoyed this
Reviewed by Bonnie May 5/31/2008
You have found what you seek for this poem has much wisdom and we can all drink from it. Thank you my friend for sharing. Love, Bonnie
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