|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|A spicy write, Eileen. I like how you show the progression along the way. Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|It helps to be handsome, in an early Elvis sort of way. Adam Lambert gets me, and I'm not even gay.
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|neath the elm of primal desire you built the bed of passion Eileen --you wrote it well and the smile on your face I can plainly see -- this is good stuff my friend -- peace and love-- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Yes, sometimes just a look can get you going...Nicely done ET
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|... blimey... i'm squirmin in me breeches just reading this one, Eileen!... i must have ants in me pants to get up them stairs! :)) they say that communication is 80 per cent body language, after all... you must be pretty fluent! Bootylicious, thank you. xx|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Don't you love it when desire's are flamed....this is hot!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Sounds like quite a Master!|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Have you been receiving some "herbs" from our lil'brother Jersey Ed, Little Sis? because of lately you have been burning paper like crazy!
Saw you hubby with that "smile" all over his face going by (didn't said hello!)
Poem more hot than a pound of chili pepper in the mouth.
Edvard, the Proper Ole Brother
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my,I love this..well done sweet lady...keep smiling OK...Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Sensual and loving too.|
|Reviewed by Carin Spirit
|Ditto on Karla ;)|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Whew. A passionate one, Eileen, and very well penned!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Oh stop it, lol! Love this sensual write. Don't you just adore Spring? Nothing like a husky whisper in the ear. Goosebumps...
The Big Sigh
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This sensual and expressive write is quite a tribute to the one it is about. Thanks for sharing, Eileen. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
I'd say you're having a good time, a very good time. Good on ya!
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|My goodness this one is such a delight, very sensual...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Hi ET, Someone must love you very much to be able to write like this. And I don't take hints very well, the hint of smile I would take as sneer, the bottom lip thrust out I would think he was a pouter, lick of the lips I would think he was some kind of a serial guy.. anyway, a stalker at the very least... LOL This romance stuff is where you write your best, ET, and that's why I say that someone must love you very much... you're the lucky one.... stay strong and true, my friend...
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|There are more enhanced methods now available, but this would be the wrong environment to elaborate on that, but I'll give you a small hint later. Bless you, and Hugs! Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Its been so long since last i was in the bedroom with anyone, other than Rufuz, could you expand on this and tell me what happens next...waiting with bated breath...;-) ed|
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|Wao! Passionate, erotic and brilliantly written.
"next you form just a hint of a smile that says
you know i know what you want"