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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
6/27/2009 |
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I had to smile as I read this poem as I recently wrote a poem using some of these exact words...I will have to post it sometime soon...
:~)
Cryssa
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| Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard } |
6/26/2009 |
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Wonderful write, enjoyed
The Buzzard |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
6/24/2009 |
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An absolute stunning piece of poetry, Eileen...a keeper for sure!
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/23/2009 |
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| I have no fancy words to describe your talent. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
6/23/2009 |
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Stunning and unique write my friend, enjoyed this much!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/23/2009 |
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| BRILLIANT, Eileen... such an apt analogy and metaphor: I could really feel this, the bubbles in the chipped glass gone dead flat. Fabulous stream of consciousness here. It's hard to say, but think this is one of your best, in my opinion. Great capture and well sustained. xx |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
6/23/2009 |
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Great pen, Eileen, so very good...
you've captured 'Fractured Feelings'
Superb imagery as par the course for you. ;) |
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| Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader) |
6/23/2009 |
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| Impressed by the choice of words. |
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| Reviewed by Chris Reed |
6/23/2009 |
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| i really enjoyed this. The imagery is breathtaking. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/23/2009 |
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| wonderful imagery and word use! |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/23/2009 |
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| ...'Wounded nights of waiting in crystal caves of lost love shaved by blades of lies...'---------EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/23/2009 |
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Quite a captivating poem and graphic, Tiger Lily.
PS Although Brother Edvard is praising you below, he just slammed you in his latest poem - For Shame! (You're still my favorite sister!) |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/23/2009 |
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Sometimes we go around reading, commenting, reviewing, like greeting a know face, a voice heard before, a hand writing on our wall, and then...you come across with a delicate pearl of a poem to surprise us with such a delight.
Thanks
Georg
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| Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese |
6/22/2009 |
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| sensually colorful ... flows effortlessly ... |
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
6/22/2009 |
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| I was floating with these lines, absolutely stunning. Be Well, Carin |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/22/2009 |
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| Beautiful, Eileen. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/22/2009 |
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| Rufuz wanted to keep going west to see his Auntie Eileen, but financial problems would not permit it...anyway I wanted to get back to the relative coolness of Jersey...but someday...ed |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/22/2009 |
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..a story colored with such exquisite taste, I agree with George, this is masterfully written..blows me away.
Love,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
6/22/2009 |
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Powerful poem, Eileen. Hopefully this is a sensitive soul's observation of other's collective pain and not yours. Just realized--this is a jazz poem! Begs to be read aloud. Stunning imagery!!
Lin |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/22/2009 |
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Eileen,
Beautiful writing sustained my bright, delicate, relevant imagery, but the last three lines suggest another mood and tone, a darkness in the heart, shades of disappointment. Fine poem.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/22/2009 |
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Stunning work, Eileen: what more can I say?? Excellent; brava!
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~
As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/22/2009 |
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| Your work is always beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/22/2009 |
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Don't know of any one who can master the descriptive lingo that you portray in a poem that should be posted where it can get critical acclaim and shine on the poetic brilliance of our master poet Eileen outside of all of us who know her brilliance already here in our little den. Bravo Eileen for yet another poetic gem for the ages. A keeper for sure.
Many hugs,
George |
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