|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|I have to totally agree with Ronalds comment .
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|This brings to mind regrets that keep us up at night. A kind of depression that results from actions taken with the best of intentions that turned out wrong. A deep and meaningful write that gets to the emotions from the heart.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|You conjure both mood and confusion well, Eileen, with the sonorous heaviness of your words to reflect that sorry, contrite heart. Hopefully with thoughts and actions that express regret, dark clouds will have been dispelled and limbo alleviated. May any such fated fiasco be transformed into sweetly refreshed friendship. Whatever the day brings, you pen it well. xx|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A very sad piece, Sis. (But very glad to see you posting.)|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Such depth of emotion. Surely have missed your sweetness.
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|it takes two to move out of limbo and into forget it mode. hence fiasco. Peace~ morgan|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Eileen, a love overwhelmed with events irreconcilable can result in the worst, disillusionment. With a heart thus wounded and love itself, impugned. We often know not where to turn to seek answers and resolution. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Bleakness of disappointment courses through
the veins of this, Eileen, and the only rescue
seems to be in the title you've chosen; it's hard
to move on after 'fated fiasco' but we must try.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|"fated fiasco" A lot of those it seems in life. Sometimes that special love we hope for never seems to materialize. Along the way types and shadows appear and disappear, and at times someone will touch us in a special way and encourage us to hope for more. Alas, how many have lamented, in a morning love song, all that remains unanswered. Bittersweet sentiments chum.
Peace and love to you ... richard
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|I've missed reading your outstanding work
and this piece I found to be an enjoyable read
of an excellent poem
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Excellent piece on life and it's tribulations.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
|Limbo, that time between "I hate you, get out" and "Please come home to me." Well penned!|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Disappointment expressed so poetically!
I know this feeling!
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|love when fiasco turn into limbo :)|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Eileen, none can surpass the gifted poetry you write every time your pen is put to paper another gem is created. I added a new word to my vocabulary (Aubade) Thank you.
Many events in life are beyond our control and that's when we let God and let go.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I admit, my friend, that you have completely stunned me with this one. Have no idea what it is supposed to be. Maybe it is just me and those who come after me will not have that problem.|