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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
10/13/2011 |
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| I think this one is one of your best Eileen the pace was fast and rhyme top class. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/17/2011 |
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| EVERYTHING HAS ITS SEASON...IN LIFE WE APPRECIATE BOTH, SUNRISE AND SUN SET. BECAUSE WE LEARN...LIGHT SHINES EVER SO BRIGHTLY IN THE NIGHT! A FINE WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/16/2011 |
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| EXCELLENT, Eileen: perfect in concept, rhythm and metre and adroitly expressed. Twilight is, for certain sure, the most tactile of between-times in which all things are possible and lines are most definitely merged. So lovely to see you posting again - have been thinking of you! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/16/2011 |
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ET, thought provoking with a mystical feel to this. wonderflly done as always!
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
8/16/2011 |
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Absolutely Lovely, Eileen.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/16/2011 |
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| Love this one, E.T.! And so nice to see you posting, Sis. |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
8/15/2011 |
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E T,
Very beautifully written poem and I love the last stanza.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
8/15/2011 |
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The night I like better than the day,
And of course I thoroughly love what you write & the way...JD |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/15/2011 |
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Wonderful poem, Eileen; always glad to see you here! Well done yet again! Love you!
(((HUGS))) and prayers~
As always, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/15/2011 |
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There is much beauty and resolute truth in your words...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/15/2011 |
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"Lest I be caught in twilight
forever and a day..."
is the nub of the matter, Eileen..
how that resonates, hits home!
The entire work strikes and charms at once.
John |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
8/15/2011 |
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Disarmingly charming!
You have written with such imaginative insight here!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
8/15/2011 |
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| surely the terminator is the offspring of this solar mating mystery of light and no light -- stygian losses are assured in the eternal battle -- Eileen you have teased me with this poem -- creative, interesting and an ending I adore -- "just when we think night has its way, alas, the light has its day", perfect! -- from the twilight I wish you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/15/2011 |
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It sounds like an urban warfare is already alive and well in Camden. But then, I've been around a few cities during my life and bad areas come and go like seasons in the wind. My dad used to talk about Cicero. When I was in San Francisco it was Little Five Points. There was Watts. There is always some place where you can get shot.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/15/2011 |
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Full circle feel...great work...nice to see you post!
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/15/2011 |
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The nightfall and the twilight of dawn are indeed mysterious "places" to be in, Eileen. Thank you also for teaching me a new word, "adumbrate." Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/15/2011 |
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| i wonder what're more mysterious, the day mating night or the night mating day? either way, they are both an inspired experience ... wonderful poem, ET ... |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
8/15/2011 |
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| always felt dusk and dawn were magical....the space they mate :) loved this one! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
8/15/2011 |
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Haha! Whimsical and mysterious all at once, my friend.
"yet still in corners adumbrate
a shadow of the night"
Loved this very necessary two lines to this poem. Had to look up adumbrate. Like that word. |
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