|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|I think this one is one of your best Eileen the pace was fast and rhyme top class.|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|EVERYTHING HAS ITS SEASON...IN LIFE WE APPRECIATE BOTH, SUNRISE AND SUN SET. BECAUSE WE LEARN...LIGHT SHINES EVER SO BRIGHTLY IN THE NIGHT! A FINE WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|EXCELLENT, Eileen: perfect in concept, rhythm and metre and adroitly expressed. Twilight is, for certain sure, the most tactile of between-times in which all things are possible and lines are most definitely merged. So lovely to see you posting again - have been thinking of you! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|ET, thought provoking with a mystical feel to this. wonderflly done as always!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Absolutely Lovely, Eileen.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Love this one, E.T.! And so nice to see you posting, Sis.|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Very beautifully written poem and I love the last stanza.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|The night I like better than the day,
And of course I thoroughly love what you write & the way...JD
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful poem, Eileen; always glad to see you here! Well done yet again! Love you!
(((HUGS))) and prayers~
As always, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|There is much beauty and resolute truth in your words...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"Lest I be caught in twilight
forever and a day..."
is the nub of the matter, Eileen..
how that resonates, hits home!
The entire work strikes and charms at once.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
You have written with such imaginative insight here!
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|surely the terminator is the offspring of this solar mating mystery of light and no light -- stygian losses are assured in the eternal battle -- Eileen you have teased me with this poem -- creative, interesting and an ending I adore -- "just when we think night has its way, alas, the light has its day", perfect! -- from the twilight I wish you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|It sounds like an urban warfare is already alive and well in Camden. But then, I've been around a few cities during my life and bad areas come and go like seasons in the wind. My dad used to talk about Cicero. When I was in San Francisco it was Little Five Points. There was Watts. There is always some place where you can get shot.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Full circle feel...great work...nice to see you post!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|The nightfall and the twilight of dawn are indeed mysterious "places" to be in, Eileen. Thank you also for teaching me a new word, "adumbrate." Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i wonder what're more mysterious, the day mating night or the night mating day? either way, they are both an inspired experience ... wonderful poem, ET ...|
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|always felt dusk and dawn were magical....the space they mate :) loved this one!|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Haha! Whimsical and mysterious all at once, my friend.
"yet still in corners adumbrate
a shadow of the night"
Loved this very necessary two lines to this poem. Had to look up adumbrate. Like that word.