|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|A deep moving poem which I too can relate to.
Hugs and love
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I can sense that the beast is at the door. So apropos for Halloween. Keep holding on tight and someday soon the wind will ease.
|Reviewed by RWEHAVING FUN
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Yet, I know you live by things such as the serenity pray.
The poem made me think of Reepicheep, in The Dawn Treader.
The internal war can be more exasperating than any external war.
Keep the bouncy faith, Tiggs xx
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Stay the course! Full speed ahead. You'll ride the wave to happiness as you have said! Patrick|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|..you rattled my soul, emotions felt...great work!|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|An excellent title, chum, and one which rings clear in my own life. Love your internal rhyme in this. I am in complete agreement with your contention: "for the worldly goods that have no meaning". Your war is personal but you are not alone in it. Our source of strength is unwavering and will never leave us or forsake us. Powerful cathartic poetry. Peace and love and hugs ... richard|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|How did I miss this one, anyway, kinda deep & dark, I think for you, sis...for some reason I thought of a pirate speaking those words, always knew you was the pirate of the family...Jurseeeeeeeeeeey|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Eileen, a place a time a spiritual event most of us have experience and endure periodically -- a soul searching time when we seek guidance from divine providence -- you present the mood for us with poetic artistry my dear friend -- I bid you joy, love and peace -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THIS CERTAINLY CAN HAPPEN BECAUSE...IF ONE DOES NOT KEEP THEIR EYES ON 'HIM'...THE STORM OUTSIDE WILL SURELY ENTER IN. A WONDERFUL WORK WITH YOUR PHRASES PRODUCING SHARP, CLEAR IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Surely a lot of insight with hard work, you must be exhausted, but you're on the right track, keep that in forefront of what always counts in the end and new beginnin, Keep on saying I am enough, just the way I am, everything else is mind, f.... well you know the rest.
Lots of Hugs! Jasmin Horst
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Fabulous sustained metaphor for the inner and outer battles that rage for so many of us, Eileen. Your conclusion really hit me, too: "after the same soul" is so true and we only have one, hence feeling ravaged and torn!! What hope for the world is there when the wild, untameable beast that is the heart within us which we know can torment US, let alone the rest of the world outside? Compound that by 7 million, as Dad keeps telling us, and... well, the mind boggles... We need the New Seekers to teach the world to sing again! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|I love the feral quality of this, the awareness!
This is wonderful poetry unleashed :)
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Keep On Fighting, Sis.
PS: Glad you're back; it's your turn to watch that old Jersey Devil.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I can relate to what you express through your verses here, Eileen. I am fortunate that for over six months now, an angel (old soul) has come into my life and settled things down. I wish you love, peace, and all good things,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|This is confessional, Eileen,
that challenges me with its honesty,
with its depth and personal intimacy.
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Life outside our heart and our soul is just a movie. We can allow ourselves to be absorbed into it or we can stand back and use it to remind us of the way that we do not wish to live. Our life-bond is between us and God, the rest is just and E Ticket to a wild and crazy world. We can take it for a spin,for our own entertainment, if we wish but I highly doubt that it is really worth the price of buying it. Very nice offering, Eileen.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|faith, inspiration, and inner strength will guide you for your soul is deep and intuitive ... follow your heart compass and your spirit will follow ....|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Keep your faith strong, Den Mother. Thinking of you especially today. Blessed Be.
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|This stanza blew me away, Eileen. Words are all that you smith.
Fighting the internal battle, when all
around the windows rattle, with the
outer forces that you cannot control
with both of them after the same