Along Our Travels
by Rose M Rideout
Friday, November 09, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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When it comes down to loving someone from your heart, there is no crime of where it is shown, for we travel through life with each waking moment and love is a beautiful gift to share with that special someone.
Along Our Travels
Along out travels through life,
We find the time to jot down a poem,
To tell of where life have taken us,
Of the places we choose to roam.
All through the back roads ,
Or in the bright city lights,
In some dark chilled corner hiding,
Or into the hot sizzeling nights.
Trying hard to keep from trouble,
Following most of lifes rules,
Watching what we say or do,
Which to others may seem cruel.
A hug for this one or just a handshake,
A how do you do with a smile,
That sly grin that leaves a message,
I'll catch up to you in a while.
Behind the closed private doors,
Or some brightly lit public place,
Where or what ever one desires,
That will set there heart in full race.
Honest, down to earth love,
A gift given to share so openly,
To have and to hold so dear,
That love between you and me.
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|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|there is no crime of where it is shown...
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|If only all could experience this kind of love. Beautiful work, Rose.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|True love at its best and is this write. Your love sure comes shining through....
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An excellent write Rose
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
|Beautiful write, Rose. Really nice work...Best wishes...Joyce|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Honest love can't be beat, Rose. Well expressed sentiments. Thanks for sharing them. Love and hugs from BC,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Beautiful poem, Rose, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|To have and to hold - a love that spans adversity and adds to life's enjoyment. This is what each of us hopes for, and you've written about it most tenderly.
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Very well said Rose. Honest, down to earth love. I like that. Bravo. Paul|
|Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner
|Honest love, sometimes a rare find, but if found can be incredible.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Amen! Love is something we need to show,to replace all the negativity and hate in the world!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Excellant expression of your loving heart and how you look at life and love. Well said.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Your last stanza gives us the insight of true love.|