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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
1/16/2009 |
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I lke the style of this write. the he and she parts. Well done
hugs
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
1/15/2009 |
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| Sadly, too many will understand this having been the broken-hearted. It just hurts so badly when someone we trust and someone we 'think' loves us betrays us and that love was false. The pain can be unimaginable. Nicely captured emotion, Rose. Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
1/11/2009 |
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PERFECT!
Rose you spoke the hearts of two, in confusion but steeped in love so well, Or so to speak!
I would rather know the truth than be lead around in pain, lies and fantasy!
I love the way you decided to darken and lighten the sentences and the style in which you chose too!
Unique poem felt strongly!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings of Love, Light and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExoo
P.S. I can feel the poem from Sweet Fee, that stroked your pen in this direction! Ahhh
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
1/11/2009 |
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I say hurt me with the truth
rather than destroy me with a lie...so letting go of false love is better than holding the daggars of it's lie
No-one deserse to hold the arms of another who does not love
this is a wonderful poem you have penned Rose
there is wonderful messages of insight inside
"A Conversation With two hearts" no matter if he sounds abrasive, he is honest...and that's a good thing
Much Love & Inspirations Always
Vickie
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
1/10/2009 |
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Well done, I liked this alot, you expressed both emotions well
In Christs Love
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/10/2009 |
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| A unique way to show both sides of love.....M |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/9/2009 |
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Been there, done that; I can completely relate, Rose. Thank you. Love and blessings to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
1/9/2009 |
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| Rose, you've shown the beauty and pain of love so well in this piece. |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
1/8/2009 |
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| A sad tale of lost love and endless new possibilities. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/8/2009 |
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Very nicely done Rose! You show the many faces of love and our
difficulty in trying to make sense of them all. Excellent poem!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
1/7/2009 |
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an excellent write Rose
Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
1/7/2009 |
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Rose,
A sharp and worthwhile look at love in all its glory and all its pain.
Thank you for this.
John |
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| Reviewed by Linda Law |
1/7/2009 |
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| Great job Rose... hearing both sides was refreshing... lindalaw |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/7/2009 |
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Love the origianality of this one Cuz and the earnest talk between two hearts instead of two lovers. Love does come in many way, shapes and forms and often our hearts do not allow us to decide who we love or dont' love but when we love wrong, to have the wisdom to go on without hate and anger is what makes even those loves...sweet memories.
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fee |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
1/7/2009 |
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Nice poem Rose...relationships are truly a gift when the two involved truly commit to each other...
nice work...
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
1/7/2009 |
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Sad to think of a hurtful heart...but it happens every day. Great write Rose.
love,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
1/7/2009 |
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OMG! ! ! she can talk!
Rose, that hearts should wear boxing gloves and make it right!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/7/2009 |
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| Cousin Fee has truly inspired you. |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
1/7/2009 |
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Rose,this is a unique and powerful poem that expresses love at its worst and at its best.I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
1/6/2009 |
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| This is a beauty Rose. Very well done my friend. God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
1/6/2009 |
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| Rose it is a great poem, I hope it is not a real one. Love Emile |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
1/6/2009 |
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Sweet Rose, a gem of a write. People come together for many reasons, but only true love and respect will keep them together...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/6/2009 |
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Rose,
Lack of communication in these lines: he said, she said, that kind of thing ... but the ending gives hope that two hearts can beat as one. Effectively penned, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/6/2009 |
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Wonderful writing, Rose; always a joy to read/review you! You are one of my very favorites here; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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