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| Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis |
2/25/2009 |
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Great but haunting write sis, and yes the words are so true darlin. Most of the memories are better left in the old house except those from our angel mother and siblings. The rest of the memories can die with the house.
Love you sis,
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| Reviewed by Cathlene Sares (Reader) |
2/21/2009 |
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Rose,
A compelling write with darkness and light.
Cathlene |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
2/19/2009 |
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I feel an intensity of deep pain here!
With an antique door of choosing,
forgiving won't be losing...
A dark foreboding poem I enjoyed reading!
as I sensed a richness in your writing!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
2/18/2009 |
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Fantastic Rose...such a story and so much meaning.
Love,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/18/2009 |
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A well written and excellent poem with a dark side to it.take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
2/17/2009 |
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Superb Rose!
This Is A Wonderful Poem With Deep Emotions
I Love This Expressive Evoking Style!
Much Love & Poetry
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/17/2009 |
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Thank you for sharing this compelling tale, Rose. There is a lot of darkness in this world. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/17/2009 |
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| A very sad tale, indeed. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
2/17/2009 |
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| BEAUTIFUL, VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by larry linville |
2/17/2009 |
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| I love this. It is great to look at an old building or a place and wonder what happened inside. You have touched me. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/17/2009 |
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How many entrances to the past are there? Is an Angel guarding us to no let someone go back to haunting memories?
I hear the echoes of a laugh back there and ask myself, from whom?
Very deep and one of your very best!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
2/16/2009 |
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| Rose, I think this is my new favorite of yours. Beautifully haunting write. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
2/16/2009 |
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How beautifully you have crafted the heartwarming piece reaching into memories long past, yet in a way always to be remembered....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Marion Burton (Reader) |
2/16/2009 |
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Hi Sissy,well i have to say ,you have outdone yourself once again.Your poems are always so wonderful,as i always say, you are so gifted,keep up the great work.You are oh,so good at poetry.
Love Marion |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/16/2009 |
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| the past certainly hold its secrets and mysteries and pain--i love the depth of this write--so much held behind that doorway |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
2/16/2009 |
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| Well done Rose. Bravo. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
2/16/2009 |
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| An excellent, haunting piece, Rose! One can't help but feel the emotions as you step back through this painful door. One of your finest! Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/16/2009 |
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Haunting write, Rose; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
2/16/2009 |
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Rose,
The single image of a doorway has triggered wonderful feelings and thoughts in you, I have to agree this is one of your finest, most rewarding pieces. Well done!
John |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/16/2009 |
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A haunting, haunted picture and write of misery within four walls. Excellently told, Rose, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/16/2009 |
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I agree with Fee, Rose! This is a truly excellent poem that tells a grim story while maintaining its mystery! Kudo's!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/16/2009 |
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I hope you can hear my applause from there for this is one of your finest works to date. You have taken the leap outside the box and the results are fantastic as the feelings and emotions roll through this write with real heart.
Hugs
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