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A Stranger by the Seashore
by Rose M Rideout

Friday, January 22, 2010
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I went to visit Fee yesterday and we went as far as the beach for a run, seemed like the perfect day for pictures. I couldn't resist this one.


A Stranger by the Seashore 

January 22,2010
Written by: Rose Marie Rideout

 



While walking along the seashore late in the afternoon,
I spotted a stranger, playing a gentle sad tune.
I watched from a distance, so he wouldn’t see,
A stranger watching through tears that stranger being  me.

I listened to the words, of his sad lonely song,
Why he lost his love, what had he done wrong,
Why life had set him back time after time,
A stranger by the seashore with a face gentle and kind.

I could feel the hurt he held deep in his heart
As his broken words asked ‘”how did all this heartache start”?
I wanted to hold him, it seemed only fair,
This stranger should know that someone do care.

It was so cold and damp that day as he sat so all alone,
I wanted so much to talk to him  and invite him to my home.
Then I saw him looking off in the distance, all alone,
I felt his heart breaking through tears and a slight moan.

His hands began to quiver as he tried so hard to strum,
His tears flowed like a river as he tried so hard to hum,
A stranger by the the seashorethe hurt that filled his heart,
Wondering in his mind, “How did all this heartache start”?


 

 


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Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/27/2010
Fantastic photo and poem, Rose! You really caught
the essence of heartache in this gem!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 1/27/2010
Heart rending, Rose. The pain and agony are apparent in your well penned lines. Love it. Liz
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 1/25/2010
heart gripping Rose
there are so deeply tides of emotion
the ache can be felt
a lovely poem about love & loss
Love Your Pic Too!!
Love & Inspirations
Vickei
Reviewed by D Johnson 1/25/2010
A song of the ages. Nicely written.

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 1/23/2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 1/23/2010
Rose, this is so heartfelt, you've brought tears to my eyes.
Reviewed by Michelle Mead 1/22/2010
You've captured Felix perfectly, Rose. I really love your poems. Do you have a book of poems out yet? Blessings, Michelle
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana 1/22/2010
Dear Rose, well done, you captured greatly the picture of Falix. As you mentioned he was a little sad, as we all can be on the seashore. Love Emile
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 1/22/2010
Rose, this is heartfelt,,,a yearning of soul sings~
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) 1/22/2010
It is so hard to watch others heartache when you feel so blessed yourself. Watching their heartache is what my tale is all about. Good write. LadyJ
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 1/22/2010
lovely words and story
Reviewed by Paul Berube 1/22/2010
Excellent Rose.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 1/22/2010
I wouldn't imagine Fee otherwise, the one and only giving life a meaning through a melancholic tune...
Great tribute!

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/22/2010
You captured the mood of the moment Rose for as I sat on that stone and began strumming a few chords my mind and heart were heavy and drifting off into another time, another place. It also seems we both liked this picture best of all the ones we took for I too used it in my posting...lol
hugs
fee
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 1/22/2010
Aw, this is beautiful Rose. It's a wonderful thing that you and Fee are close to each other. There's nothing like a loving shoulder when things aren't going well. This is a very nice picture of Fee. Hope you both had a wonderful day!

Hugs,
Anna
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