I Feel No Danger
by Rose M Rideout
Sunday, September 04, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
Print Save Become a Fan
Recent poems by Rose M Rideout
Life Goes on
a silver lining
Love me Only
It's Christmas Time
>> View all 782
We can always sence who we are safe with no fear of danger.
I Feel no Danger
September 4, 2011
By Rose Marie Rideout
It is as dark as it is still,
I see you, off in the far dark corner,
I believe you are smiling,
as I feel no danger.
You speak and say the words,
The words I have longed to hear.
You have a familiar voice,
a familiar smile and then I realize.
I have known you forever.
You are my friend, my confidant,
my reason for being,
You are my heart and soul,
My every breath,
You are my love.
It doesn’t seem to be as dark,
The sky brightens and your smile widens.
You come closer, I have no fear,
For we become one love,
Together for eternity
as I feel no danger.
Want to review or comment on this
Click here to login!
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|You are truly blessed!
|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|With true love comes that secure feeling you speak of, Rose. Lovely writing, my friend...
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|The sense of trust, Rose,
and the senses of love and belonging
are beautifully rendered here.
This is very fine indeed.
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|"Together for eternity."
Well done Rose it sounds a bit like this person may be dead, or dying. Maybe it's just too early and I haven't had my second cup of coffee.
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|So full of love is this poem! Beautifully expressed!
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Beautiful sentiments for the man you love, I am sure he will enjoy this one...
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Rose, as always you have a unique way of expressing the boundless measures of love.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a beautiful feeling, the safety of love ... a wonderful state of being ... i've felt this safety for 43 years ...|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|This one is definitely a keeper, Rose. Well done, thanks Dick|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Very beautiful, Rose. A level of comfort and safety felt only with someone special. ~Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Very, very beautiful poem. It's wonderful to feel safe with a loved one.
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|Very beautiful words my northern friend. With great love comes great familiarity. How lovely to "feel no danger."
Your friend in Southern California; Mark
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|ROMANTIC AND VERY BEAUTIFUL, SWEET WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|