|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|My, my you're a strong one with this poem. STUNNING!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Awesome. Keep up the fight to have your options and don't let nay sayers take them away. You are strength, itself. Excellent. Liz|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|great verse, and I can relate, we should be happy when we defy the odds and maintain our smile, sense of humor and anything else positive|
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|My fav verse is the second one,"I admire the choices I have
... and keep moving.
In the wind
from delusional visions
of monsters within...
I'm sad for them,
happy for me."
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|rekindled underbelly writes_again you forge through.~. evol Ted|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Beautiful writing that just flows.|
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Reading this, I can't help but picture clouds in my mind-- scurrying across the sky-- forming images, and then tearing them apart in their hurry to flee. So I was glad to read "Eolian signs of life I seek" near the end.
I Loved "painted like Cocteau eyes"!-- so visual... and meaningful too, because of his being a surrealist-- it adds a deep dimension to the piece.
You feel the rush of air across your mind, and then the peace of your admiring choices, and then the surreal rush again.
I had never thought of truth like this before-- I'd always thought of it as the thing that's immovable-- the thing that makes us strong if we stand with it against the winds of adversity.
This, on the other hand, makes me think of truth as a wind-- a powerful, whipping wind that exposes delusions, and stirs minds to chase their own fallacies. --an interesting take. But to ride the winds of truth, and to have your strengths made manifest would indeed be a remarkable occurrence. --Charlie
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Thoughts and images flowing with each line to create this wonderful piece that seems to flow from your heart to ours.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Lovely my dear friend, just lovely.
You are so eloquent.
Peace, love, and light,