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By Nature
by Axilea MU

Sunday, April 27, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Facing the wind
they run
from their own hostility
misunderstanding it for doctrines
ancient as their genes.
Billboard happiness
encloses the paths within
erecting barbwire fantasies
painted like Cocteau eyes
remodeled Geisha lips
to hide the truth of a smile
from fearful XY's
exceedingly anguished
by the power of an encompassing womb.

Here I stand
at the crossroads (for a minute)
I admire the choices I have
... and keep moving.
In the wind
they run
from delusional visions
of monsters within...
I'm sad for them,
happy for me.

Eolian signs of life
I seek
immobility is a moment
fighting against the storm
a weakness
while gliding on the air flow
of life
is rekindled truth
unlocked by nature


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Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 4/30/2008
My, my you're a strong one with this poem. STUNNING!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 4/28/2008
Awesome. Keep up the fight to have your options and don't let nay sayers take them away. You are strength, itself. Excellent. Liz
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 4/28/2008
great verse, and I can relate, we should be happy when we defy the odds and maintain our smile, sense of humor and anything else positive
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 4/28/2008
My fav verse is the second one,"I admire the choices I have
... and keep moving.
In the wind
they run
from delusional visions
of monsters within...
I'm sad for them,
happy for me."
Reviewed by Ted Bossis 4/28/2008
rekindled underbelly writes_again you forge through.~. evol Ted
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 4/27/2008
Beautiful writing that just flows.
Reviewed by Charlie 4/27/2008
Reading this, I can't help but picture clouds in my mind-- scurrying across the sky-- forming images, and then tearing them apart in their hurry to flee. So I was glad to read "Eolian signs of life I seek" near the end.

I Loved "painted like Cocteau eyes"!-- so visual... and meaningful too, because of his being a surrealist-- it adds a deep dimension to the piece.

You feel the rush of air across your mind, and then the peace of your admiring choices, and then the surreal rush again.

I had never thought of truth like this before-- I'd always thought of it as the thing that's immovable-- the thing that makes us strong if we stand with it against the winds of adversity.

This, on the other hand, makes me think of truth as a wind-- a powerful, whipping wind that exposes delusions, and stirs minds to chase their own fallacies. --an interesting take. But to ride the winds of truth, and to have your strengths made manifest would indeed be a remarkable occurrence. --Charlie

Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/27/2008
Thoughts and images flowing with each line to create this wonderful piece that seems to flow from your heart to ours.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 4/27/2008
Lovely my dear friend, just lovely.
You are so eloquent.
Peace, love, and light,

Amber "V"

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