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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
5/7/2009 |
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| Great words, my friend, great poem it is one of the greatest I read in a while. Been missing you too, but glad I found you tonight. Happy Mother's Day in Turkey on Sunday. |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
4/10/2009 |
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a tribute to the end
the true beginning...
Says it all, and you filled it with much more!
UNFORGETTABLE!
Thought provoking and intriguing is your writing style Axilea, I feel I want to get in your head, heart and spirit!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of Love, Peace, and Warm Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
3/23/2009 |
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Reading this feels like a good, decent rain-- refreshing. My favorite line: "ire iron hurt"
--love the alliteration there, and the acrid taste of it in my brain. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
3/11/2009 |
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| Thought provoking and compelling. Your writing just draws the reader from one word to the next in a rush for more. Excelent. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/5/2009 |
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the last stanza is your gift in this fine piece...
true words of brilliance, Axilea, excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Keith Rowley |
2/25/2009 |
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the violence of weak warriors
honorless
And you my dear are the essence of poetic excellence.
Keith |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/24/2009 |
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Great poem,fantastic work,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
2/24/2009 |
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Axilea - another thought provoking poem. Admire the way the structure of the poem imitates its message. The first lines:
beginning with the end,
the pencil
scratches the surface
and the last lines:
then cool ashes
soothing
turned into paper
on which
the faithful line is written
...the lining of tomorrow
to arrive at:
a tribute to the end
the true beginning...
- David
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
2/23/2009 |
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The thought becomes written through the lining of tomorrow--neat.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
2/23/2009 |
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Axilea,
Time past is time present...the undercurrents of 'quartets' suggested but you make it distinctly your own, that unique voice I so admire. As always, simply excellent.
John |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
2/23/2009 |
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A provocative look at tomorrow, Axilea.
The struggle ends in my beginning...?
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/23/2009 |
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Deep and thought awakening write that definately plays to the physcology of the poet and writer. Well done Axiulea...
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
2/23/2009 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
2/22/2009 |
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| This write speaks to me of parts of the whole, resulting in the circles of destiny.........thought provoking indeed, pax A |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/22/2009 |
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STUNNING composition, Axilea - undone by the wonder of your imaginative pen - thank you. Beautiful.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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