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| Reviewed by Mekael Shane |
11/22/2009 |
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This poem, in my opinion, is an invitation,whereby "me the reader," becomes "me the viewer." Welcomed in, and allowed to sit and watch the power in the memoried exchange between the two people therein, simply, satisfying and sensing.
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| Reviewed by David Pennebaker |
8/11/2009 |
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| You write well. It's wonderful to read a soul speaking. |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
4/26/2009 |
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Splendid poetic penning
Best wishes |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/12/2009 |
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Axilea,
Such a feeling of tranquility in your words. Soothing, yet adventurous. Like many of our dreams can be. I love the title of this piece, too. Happy Easter:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Miller Caldwell |
4/10/2009 |
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How well you capture the moments. No wonder you have had so many commont on your poetry. It's simply inspirational.
Well done
Miller |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
4/10/2009 |
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Your style of writing my friend, behooves me
I am stunned by the soft grace of your pen, as your words form...
A glass harmonica is fragile
and your poem is magical and soft-feeling, as read and written!
Loved it - goes into my Axilea, folder to read over...
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of Peace, Love and Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
3/24/2009 |
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This has the hazy quality of a dream, yet the hint of the clear perceptions and clarity that come through those same dreams
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
3/23/2009 |
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This has a very soft-fuzzy quality to it that somehow contrasts with the title.
The title conjures up something clear, vibrant, magical and somehow solid, though other-worldly.
But in the end it all comes together-- it's not the tool itself, but the music made by it--intangible, pervasive, elegant, and yet wistful.
Perhaps the reciever of the poem was able to catch the melody and tuck it away in a box, to be revisited each time the box is opened. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
3/22/2009 |
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| Excellent and very precious. |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
3/20/2009 |
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Interestingly expressed thoughts Axilea...dreams can keep one within that bubble of security and yet when one visualizes the encounters within and then find questions of how and why as though a realty of a world that can make for the most mystical of events....there is that within your lines of thought, a place where one can hide, find, or just enjoy the presence of an escape...
nice work...
Art Sun.... |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
3/20/2009 |
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| Axilea, you have written this so beautifully...so softly... from the title to your very last line. I think this is my new favorite of yours...but then, there are so many. Another one for my library. |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
3/19/2009 |
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Axilea - Enjoyed your Glass Harmonica (Love the title),its dream images
and metaphors, especially:
a hyphen
between your absence
and my presence.
and
Finger rubbed
on a crystallophone:
notes from a rare instrument,
titillating reverie
and tinkling smiles
- David |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
3/18/2009 |
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Gripped my heart and soul from the beginning, Axilea M. The title, exquisite, the progression, inevitable, the ending? -maybe semi-divine?- In completion, both sorrowful and hopeful, with a melancholy I understand.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/16/2009 |
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| shared dreams have their own special music even when the melody is unaccompanied ... |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
3/16/2009 |
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Thank you, Axilea, for allowing me to participate in this
so personal and tastefully rendered dream, for a brief moment,
to lose myself in the color, sound, and feel manifested in the
beauty and skill in which you craft this most intriguing work
of art. A marvelous title. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by stan nassano |
3/16/2009 |
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great title Axilea,blurring the senses and thoughs in a dream state,
nicely done,
stan |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
3/16/2009 |
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Uniquely beautiful and inspiring.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/16/2009 |
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Axilea as always you amaze and awe me with the strength and beauty of your poetry. This one is no exception...it takes the reader for a wonderful look into your dreams and the images blossom like fireworks of summer flowers.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
3/16/2009 |
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I could hear music in the background as I read your sensitive and well written poetry!
Nicely done, my friend.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
3/16/2009 |
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| This is soft, delicate and very intriguing. I love the tone you set with your first two lines. I have been working on a poem about consciously dreaming - consciously inviting someone in. So, it's especially poignant for me to discover this beautiful composition here this morning. I find this to be one of your more "accessible" poems and it is my favorite of yours to date. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/16/2009 |
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Axilea,
Glass harmonica - such a fragile thing! Such a beautiful image you pen - undone by the wonder of you. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
3/16/2009 |
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
3/16/2009 |
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Axilea,
This has the mood of music heard in another room, one of my favourite sensations, a mood that blends realities, projections, separations and desires and above all sensuality, the drops of oil, the "Finger rubbed"; full of dark passions in the world of half-dream and waking.
John |
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