|Reviewed by William Bonilla
most enjoyable reading
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|A splendid piece.|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Excellent imagery in these lines.|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Yes, Axilea, pure emotion beautifuly rendered.
This is to keep and to read again and again.
I love it. -gene.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Like John, I too have accessed the intensity of mood and emotion via the "dismembered umbrella" and the brittle bones of the lifeless bird, metal or otherwise. Our synaptic responses are evidence that we are more than clockwork, more than recycled salvage. The comparisons do indeed realease that "pure emotion". You are effortless in painting the surreal. xx|
|Reviewed by Alan Abrams
|the images rise and pulse, catch a glint of light, and fall back into shadow. time is itself is unmoored from the clock, from the calendar, advancing and receding. just pure emotion--and sensation.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|For me, Axilea, this work has a predominantly surreal quality and atmosphere, a dead discarded umbrella stripped to the ribs is the condition where our vulnerability is exposed and hope is gone.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THIS IS A TERRIFIC METAPHORIC WORK...THOUGHTS OF THOSE GRAY METAL BIRDS THAT ALWAYS SEEM TO SHOW UP...ESPECIALLY, WHEN IT RAINS. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This speaks to the soul.
A journey into unexpected pain here, full of serious and powerful imagery.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Such vivid images collect in my mind after reading this poem. So well written and full of descriptive, emotional analogies.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Deep emotions are felt as this journey unfolded~|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|surreal images enforce the existential fabric of this exploratory prosaic feat ...|