|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|The details of a life! The things we accumulate and discard in our journey through life. Best wishes ken|
|Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
|Well done indeed. Much depth in each line. Freed from the grip of gluey dregs...Finality prevails......Unequaled from beginning to end...
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Incredible depth to this piece, Axilea. Interesting how the past shapes us and forces us to move forward. Like the sense of hope from that last line, too.
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Axilia, Remembering but moving on...
|Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
|It only hurts when we laugh.ha! I really love your work, your heart, your soul.
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|If only I could add to say.......|
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Oooo, I get those numbers--love those numbers. They add symetry to the whole of the poem. "took took took" and its rephrasing in "look look look" do the same; nothing I love better than a parallel bit of poetry. On a different note, there is no sadness in this poem, but a sense of finality, self-mockery, and spacious freedom. This year will be fuller than ever of the antithesis: may it be full of beginnings, of self discovery and success, and of loosing yourself in tight bonds of brotherly love. --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Fortune tends to take care of itself, how we deal with our choices is entirely up to us. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|....outpouring of bottled up feelings is a good thing to do...this is amazing poetry..unique Axilea~|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|nothing like a good wind-washing to refresh one's perspective.
excellent writing herein, axilea.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|I'm not sure you've removed the pain entirely,
Axilea, but rather sublimated it; this is wish
in a different way, a see through the nonsense
and insincerity way; the images come together
to paint a still life: cards, absinthe glasses,
vase and that old parrot mimicing, repeating.
You stir so much in me with this poetry, thank you.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Interesting, moving as if a web of time. Creativity at its best...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Beautiful are these verses, Axilea. Brilliant are their hue upon the mind. A creative mind on your birthday even yet.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
This work is brilliantly hypnotic in the use of syntax, as well as simply stunning in layered meaning!
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Top to bottom, wonderful lines, so skillfully crafted,
especiall this one:
on the windís wings rings my laughter:
I like how you removed the pain from this painful tale, Axilea.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Great imagery paints your story with honesty and raw life. Love it. Liz|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Stunning creativity at its best Axilea...bravo.