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Travel Unlocked
by Axilea MU

Thursday, September 29, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I travel more than I think, more than I know, further than I ever have. A garden table with breadcrumbs for the birds  - undercurrent wish – background noises – street fluidity – engines – fumes – afternoon liquid gold. The city turns like hands around the clock. I opened the lock, now I travel.

Inside it should be womb-like security, the lining made of the music of tears, of all the warmth that you cried. Still I spiral on, I have chosen to. Organic decisions are stronger than what you thought. Filigree essence screen – palpable air, filtered. Vibrating to the waves of life – a moment in which you dwell, a present shell in which you nestle. So I catch the thicker atmosphere around, like a salmon feeling the fresh water, absorbing it through its gills.

That is when, that is where, I travel. A flight of stairs, and up I go, never mind the holes in the threadbare oriental rugs,  the tarred lungs of curtains and walls. Up I go, to rooms of restless sleep printed in the air. When I open the creaking window, overcoming its resistance, I feel the quiet air that crowns the closed garden. An orderly renaissance. A white garden table stippled with breadcrumbs - nurturing dots - pointillism from a distance.
I know, in many ways, I travel.
 

 

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Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/4/2011
As always Axilea you excel when you put your heart and mind in combination to offer us such masterfully done poetry.
fee
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 10/4/2011
Thanks, Axilea, for allowing me to tag along
in the many ways you travel...as the city turns
like hands around the clock...and I slip into
your incredible mind. -gene.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 10/4/2011
So much about this poem, fills me with uplifting messages. You have written a beauty here Axilea!

Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by JMS Bell 10/2/2011
THE MIND IS AN AWESOME THING...THE PLACES IT CAN TAKE US AND BRING US BACK SAFELY...IS UNLIMITED! IT CERTAINLY BREAKS THE BOREDOME OF STAYING IN ONE PLACE ALL THE TIME(SMILE). GOOD WORK AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/1/2011
An expansive and nourishing poem ~ many especially beautiful passages here!
Love,
Christine
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron 9/30/2011
Sometimes the most necessary trips aren't physical ones, but rather emotional and spiritual journeys that are even more3 needful. I love the way you express this longing.

Chip Bergeron
Reviewed by Jon Willey 9/30/2011
journeys of the heart, journeys of the imagination are splendid motives of travel -- we have given tenure to the priorities in our lives and seek them as psychological comfort food -- for they are part and parcel of our value programming -- your impressions of these journeys wears a comfortable pair of shoes -- immovable physical residences do not prohibit our travel, simply the vehicle we choose -- you have found the who what when where how and why of personal satisfaction -- I am enamored with this work Axilea -- it is philosophical and story telling and introspection at a level that comforts this reader -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by D. Vegas 9/30/2011
Axilea, Many ways of travel and you gave us a few. I love how your mind works...well done again!

Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/30/2011
"I travel more than I think, ..."
the emotional release of it!
staying where we are is often the best point
of departure for the heart.
Your setting, your 'place' Axilea, is confident
and mature (even if the window creaks and there's
tobacco tar on the walls) you are comfortable in your own skin
and the conditions are ideal then for spiritual adventure.

John
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 9/30/2011
"Up I go, to rooms of restless sleep printed in the air" it is hard to single out one line in this journey, but love this, the sky is the limit..your poem is masterful!
Christine
Reviewed by Charlie 9/30/2011
Oooo, the attic within. I love it. Yours sounds creaky-freindly. My favorite inward traveling place is a forest. What a pretty poinillated picture you've penned. --Charlie
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley 9/29/2011
Count your blessings.
Enjoy every trip.
Take lots of pictures.
May your saucer come to overflow and drip.

db
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 9/29/2011
I can understand the quest for travel. I fulfilled my own quest for that desire for ore years than I cane to remember. I come here when you post, I hardly ever see you over in my side of the railroad tracks,



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