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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
2/21/2008 |
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If only everyone really tried, this world would be a much happier place, well stated...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Maalikaya C |
2/21/2008 |
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Whoever this is sounds like someone - who feels alone; who has a thirst for love; that only in helping another would feel better about himself; who will take a chance to get ahead with no remorse or guilt.
Sharing love will just be hypocrisy - even he himself will find obscure. I don’t think this man would change without help. He would be too weak to fight this addiction of greed.
This is a sad one. No wonder why you don’t want me to read it.
No worries - you are still my one and only poet – This shows your versatility. |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
2/21/2008 |
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"Imagine if everyone tried! this is a goal we poets keep screaming about. I know some are listening and to quit would cede to failure and no of us are built that way.
Thank you Dave for bolstering harmony.
Blessings and love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/21/2008 |
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| yes, just imagine the change we could have if everyone did indeed "try" |
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