|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|love the whimsical nature of your work-i also enjoyed your bio page, glad i stopped by|
|Reviewed by J M
|You are so talented and I loved this one I think it was something I needed to read today from the evil and serious world around us.
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|LOL! Peeing in the pool? Some things simply can not be tolerated sir! LOL! Great little ditty here!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|clever humor ...|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
I'm glad I didn't miss your page. Sooo creative. Wish I'd thought to write this!
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|A child's heart. cute, Lady J|
|Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson
|Another cute lyrical poem. I bet kids enjoy the story. Its a great idea!....M|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my..you are something..LOL|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thanks for sharing the wit and humor. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Too funny! We need more poeple like you in this world. Laughter is good for the soul, holly|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Todd, this is hilarious! Thanks for sharing this delightful piece of whimsy; enjoyed much~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|LOLOL an excellent poem, Todd-Michael! You've perfectly captured what it would be like with a mammoth!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Only a chosen few are gifted to write children's poetry. You are one of these.
I remember this one. He's welcome in our apartment, if he doesn't mind the bedrooms being upstairs LOL No cars to squash, though. Well done, TODD!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.