|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Awesome write. The voyage of lovers compared to the river is excellent. Love it.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A beautiful write that is easy to "feel." Thank you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|..Oh Patrick my heart is so sad..I miss Aussie so much..I grew up there but now live in Croatia...The imagery is so alive and perfect!ty
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Beautiful and sad - as parting must be. Exquisite in its visual appeal, Patrick.
|Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
|What a brilliant read, it flows just as well as its subject, and reads majestic, well done Patrick, you done this so very well indeed...take care...Mark...|
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Images here were indeed something else.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent poem that flows as effortlessly as the river it sojourns...|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Perhaps they will join at the ocean.
Best wishes always.
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Written with Excellence this was so touching and beautiful loved the entirety|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Inside each human heart is an image of this, though locations may differ.. I add yours to my own because you took me there in words too beautiful, too fragile to be reinvented by mere comments in a box. This touched that secret place.. oh, the heart of a romantic man. Lovely, Patrick. katy.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Your words paints a nice picture. There are so much goodness in this one, Patrick! It is so beautiful the way you have described this. You words have added much wonders visual effect in my mind.
Wonderful work indeed!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
|a beautiful, poignant piece Patrick.
(also congrats of the win for a Kind of Death - deserved indeed)
|Reviewed by Victoria Murray
|Beautiful. As I knew it would be. Patrick, you are such a talent!
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|A wonderfully wrought poem....I agree the last line has a sense of acceptance...Loved it.Ty, Dani
|Reviewed by Sally Odgers
|Some good images there, Patrick. I especially like the last line. Very resigned.