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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/6/2005 |
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| A compelling and stark message, David. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/6/2005 |
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Wonderful read...thanks for this offering!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/5/2005 |
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| You know coming back today from the mountains we noticed something on one hillside how the grass did not look right as if it was chemically burned. Weird but your poem just brought forth the stark images in my mind of that mountainside. The opposite side showed green beneath the dried grass. |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
2/5/2005 |
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I like that "not on company time" description. Ain't it great David?
Thank you for stopping by my small corner of the AuthorsDen-dom (as opposed to kingdom in case you didn't catch the translation). As a politically critical thinker--which is what reading your work here brings out as my personal impression--I felt a connection between the way things are (futile) and the way things were (prosperous). Sort of a Tale of Two Cities kind of feel.
Very impassioned writing. blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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