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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
7/7/2007 |
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| Why would anyone want to bring another woman when you can have a La Belle all to yourself? :-) Excellent Passionate longing |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/6/2007 |
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Enjoyed reading this one....lovely offering sis!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk |
7/6/2007 |
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| Excellent thoughts written LaBelle...enjoyed reading your work again...take care...Hugs, Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
7/5/2007 |
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You deserve nothing less. Outstanding expression.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
7/5/2007 |
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| I read this beautiful poem with misty eyes and pain touched heart! You are so worthy of love and to be treated like the Queen that you are, settle for nothing less, My Sweet Sissy! I LOVE YOU! Sissy |
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| Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader) |
7/5/2007 |
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| Baggage can mess up any relationship. This was wise, gentle, and strong all at the same time. I enjoyed it. Lydi** |
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| Reviewed by Lewis Findley (Reader) |
7/5/2007 |
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| If this is not heart spoken, i dont know what is. Most truly exquisite. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/5/2007 |
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How can anybody dare to take "her" under your roof?
Shared love is like walking with both feet in one shoe.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/5/2007 |
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Wonderful write, Labellel; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/5/2007 |
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Show it, just don't say it: that's the message I got. Spot on truth, La Belle, excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
7/5/2007 |
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Such strength in your writing as always, darling Belle. And such heart-rending honesty.
never again will i accept
balancing on the precarious edge
and not resting in the center of love
... A woman's heart is made to be poised and focussed on all that she desires to nurture, and not marginalised so that she lives with inner dysfunction. So clearly you put this in these succinct lines. Your poetry teaches as well as reveals. Very few have the depth of self-knowledge and understanding that you so graciously possess.
You show us in this beautiful write that the road to inner peace is often at the cost of that which we hold most dear: our cravings, loves and obsessions. You are one brave lady and I love and admire you immensely. Bless you, Kate xx
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| Reviewed by Beryl McMullen |
7/5/2007 |
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| I love this poem fills my romantice soul all or nothing |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
7/5/2007 |
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| Full commitment or nothing: you are of course right. That is as it should be. You write a beautiful poem. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
7/5/2007 |
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| I'll leave me baggage at the airport... |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
7/5/2007 |
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La Belle, I don't remember who said it...but it goes like this; "If you're going to talk the talk, you've got to walk the walk." Good pen.
Peace,
Dan |
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