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First Kiss
by Eleni A Skarpari
Thursday, January 11, 2007
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The sweet odor of your breath
envelops me
as you softly
brush
your lips against mine,
numb and thirsty with
longing.
Pleasurable torture
Where two mouths alone
are engaged
and the arms
lie helpless on either side.
The minutes pass,
the hour also,
and the lips do not stop
caressing cheeks and eyes,
addictive flesh.
Mouth that teases slowly,
expertly, wetting my own,
taunting me
with the most tiny,
almost imperceptive
bites,
on the edges,
moving on to a shoulder blade,
a prolonged breath on my arm
hanging lose and heavy.
I can feel deep breaths
of a body
about to
explode
in a passion
lingering
between fear
and sex.
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
11/27/2007 |
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The sensuality described in this kiss is akin to the colors on the palette of iridescent passion. Beautifully done, Eleni...beautifully done.
Be well
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl |
7/24/2007 |
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Excellent portrayal of yearning and want.
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/16/2007 |
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You have a gift of expressing passion and emotions, Eleni. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
3/9/2007 |
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Very nice....your poem is filled with the sensual and exotic view of where the kiss can begin a slow and methodical process of exploration and escape upon the cappturing of the senses through sexual desire .....
very nice work.....Art sun... |
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| Reviewed by Maximus Leiter (Reader) |
2/26/2007 |
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| I would like to say that this poem rose my feelings to a place that I had not reached for such a long time. It is sensual, pure, innocent and plenty of passion. It seems like the words came from depth of a volcano doing eruption. It made feel the pleasure of a kiss and the pleasant torture of sexual desire. |
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| Reviewed by Michael Mathieu |
1/12/2007 |
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A very sensual write,longing for romance.
Had me on the edge of my seat for a moment,
Excellent poem
God Bless,
Michael
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