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Till Then
by Crissy M Foster

Wednesday, February 28, 2007
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If I say you have my heart
Can you tell me what to do
If I told you that I love you
Can you say you love me too

If I told you how I felt
And I dared to bear my soul
If I allowed a tear to shed
Would the pressure make me fold

Can you take a chance

On love again
And hold me by your side
Can you see through all the flaws in me
And stay with me until I died

If I told you just how much

 You really mean
Would our friendship die

Or would something new be seen

If you tell me you love me

I will say I do
if you ask for my hand

Iíll grow old with you

Till then Iím silent

Till then weíre friends
Till then Iíll count my blessings
Till then...

Till then

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Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 3/2/2007
Thought provoking pen of honesty, and desire.
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 3/2/2007
Wonderful write, beautiful thoughts, great expression. Very warm and heartfelt my friend!
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Edwin Larson 3/1/2007
Beautiful flow and heartfelt feel to this write Crissy. You show a different style here. I liked this alot.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 3/1/2007
Very giving write...surrendering all self "Till Then" I like the honesty within the questions...
Love and Peace~
Reviewed by Randall Barfield 3/1/2007
really nice title and repetition of "till then" thanks for sharing
Reviewed by Bennett 3/1/2007
Wow this is just splendid. When we write exactly the way we want and how we exactly feel then we all can relate or feel it. it is always an indeed pleasure to read your poetry especially ones with so much meaning and easy to understand. Keep writing and never stop. Love Aleja Bennett.
Reviewed by K. Mulroney 3/1/2007
A well written rhyme of hope and secret longing. Nice job.
Reviewed by Debra Baker 3/1/2007
A lovely poem here, truely written from the heart. In order to love, we must be best of friends first.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 3/1/2007

I think this would make an excellent song. This reminded me of going out on a limb and hoping it doesn't break. Is suppressing ones feelings healthy for the friendship?
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 2/28/2007
Friendships grow, and can grow into love, like growing seedlings.
Expressed wonderfully....
Reviewed by Denise Contreras 2/28/2007
I like this it is beautiful thank you.
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 2/28/2007
Lovely picture of a love waiting to grow.
Reviewed by Art Sun 2/28/2007
Nice...a view of one's love for another, though friendship is the beginning and the long term goal....

enjoyed this poem.....Art Sun...
Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels 2/28/2007
I truly enjoyed reading your poem, this was poetry . it's best!!
Reviewed by cecil hickman 2/28/2007
your imagery within this poem has been poured out of your heart with flowing words of devotion, also your words tell me you are a lady of conviction and dedication I sincerely hope that your love that you have expressed here are returned with your partners, heart and soul,,,blessings Cecil
Reviewed by jude forese 2/28/2007
a soulful expression of love's potential, Chrissy ...
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu 2/28/2007
Well,an outpouring of love,I hope you get what you wish,you sure deserve being happy,Said from the heart,Good luck,
Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/28/2007
Beautiful write Chrissy, we are as humans often so fragile when it comes to matters of the heart. To commit, to say we love, to open ourselves body and soul to the idea of forever is for some the most painful thing to ask. You have barred your heart in this write and your passion glows with your sincerity, hope you will not have to wait long for your answers.

Reviewed by Brett Moore 2/28/2007
Great love poem, Crissy! I love the outpouring of the heart and then the patience in the end which the reader can sense will not last forever. Good write.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 2/28/2007
These are bittersweet sentiments, Crissy; they speak to the soul. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

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