by Crissy M Foster
Saturday, June 09, 2007
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Ok, basically it means, no matter how little feelings you think someone has, if you are always there for them, they can fall in love too.
Believe in me,
I don't believe in anyone
Pray for me,
I have hope for none
Laugh for me,
Anger fills my soul
Be with me,
For I am not whole
Cry with me,
let me lean on you
Let me fall true
that you love me too
Because I fell
in love with you.
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|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|This SPEAKS LOUND N CLEAR, for me atdemo|
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|Nice and sweet write. There's nothing better than having someone to 'lean' on in life. Seek and you will find...|
|Reviewed by Denise Contreras
|This is a great write.
Thanks Hugs Angela
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Ah sweet, and I do have a tendency to agree. Love at first sight does happen but I think in most cases it is desire that creates attraction and love only develops with time and effort. I have also heard people say that they cannot love someone because they are friends and it always made me wonder for what would be a more perfect base for love than friendship...perhaps though they are not physically attracted and the friendship card allows no hurt feelings. Anyway this is a great write...honest and open and one that will make readers think.
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Crissy I have never read a more
Complete write about believing and caring!
Well I believe that all of your friends here
Believe in you and care for you,
I believe I just found a new Friend!
Who's poetic thoughts inspired my soul!
Your writing is outstanding my friend!!
Wishing you and yours Love Peace and Happiness...Morning Star
|Reviewed by Brett Moore
|Great way of showing the contradictory nature of humanity. Liked this alot.
|Reviewed by Fergus Hancock
|Crissy, the flow of emotion through the lines of this poem show your power. There are many of us who do believe in you; and in whatever way you find God, she believes in you too.
Love is the best kind of belief, after all......
Regards - Fergus