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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
3/1/2007 |
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Can't you see
I rise from the sea..:))
Cute and enjoyable, as is the poem..)) |
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| Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett |
3/1/2007 |
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| Wow this is just splendid. When we write exactly the way we want and how we exactly feel then we all can relate or feel it. it is always an indeed pleasure to read your poetry especially ones with so much meaning and easy to understand. Keep writing and nevaer stop. Love Aleja Bennett. |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
3/1/2007 |
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A nice expression of thought ... reminds me of a time when I laid upon the grass looking up at the clouds...a memory of childhood...
Nice work on this poem.....Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
3/1/2007 |
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| Can see the children laying on the grass staring at the white pillows in the sky! Great childrens piece. |
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