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My Life Slammed The Door In My Face
by lucky A Ahmed

Sunday, February 04, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Its about sometimes you need to just reflect on your life and see if your going i the right direction.
you can sometimes be suprised at where its heading to.

My life slammed the door in my face
It stoppd me in my tracks
I was doing things so hurriedly I didn’t realize my pace

I looked back on my life
I thought about it not once but twice
I wasn’t alive or dead
I didn’t get stopped by death

Was I in heaven or hell
I really can`t tell

I felt so sad for some reason
A reason I don’t know why

I said my sorry's
To myself
To my mother
To my father
To my friends
To my neighbour
I could remember the faces of everyone I met

I said my sorry's to them all

I sat there in silence…..then the door to my life opened
I found myself again
I found the right path

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Reviewed by jeanne watson 2/4/2007
Expressed well, my friend. It seems sometimes as if life just doesn't wish to be a seems, but as you found it is not so.

..enjoyed reading..
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 2/4/2007
If You Don't Slow Down You Fall Down...

Reviewed by Laura Mayer 2/4/2007
Extremely touching write, so glad it was a happy ending.
Hugs, Laura
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 2/4/2007
Sad poem...but what a wonderful ending!!! I really liked that!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

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