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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Saturday, May 22, 2004
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Hear in the distance the cadence of thunder.
It's saying a storm's on the way.
See in the clouds the paths of tracer fire.
It's seeking new victims today.
The wind screams out the name of the enemy.
Who'll be number one on the list?
Frozen bullets slam into the trembling earth.
Some of them the size of God's fist!
Low flying bombers overhead dump their loads.
Earth's citizens seek safe shelter.
The storm sends out its specially trained forces.
Twisters create helter skelter.
The fury runs out of weapons and moves on.
The clouds shed a few final tears.
The sun peeks sadly from behind broken skies.
War once more ripped the atmosphere.
(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is one of your best! Great write!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I love it when nature makes war, don't you?|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Brilliant poem, Karla; and love how you used the imagery in this write! Could feel the storm's fury and hear the crashing of the thunder and see the lightning lighting up the sky and hear the howling winds and driving rain as I read this stormy write! Very well done, Karla! BRAVA! Enjoyed much!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|And Gods creation, weeps in pain, very poignant Karla....|
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent poem Karla!!
Like the way you used nature here!!
|Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr
|Interesting write about how a storm is like a war battle as it moves thru.
Very good write and enjoyable for sure
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Well done, incredible imagery, Karla!|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|You are SO GOOD at storms, girl, glad you were not anywhere near the major tornadic activity in the central plains...if your writing you're okay, and that makes Rufuz and I happy, Peace, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|A great write imagery and feeling. Good work Karla!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|I weathered well the first Tornados and damaging hail last night...
Rain was rushing over the streets like rivers and i thought of you have pc in basement and took cover... HUGS.
This is a good poem karla.....
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Superb storm imagery Karla! You have become an
expert in this genre! Wonderful metaphor!Kudo's!;-)
|Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen
|Good images. "the sun peeks sadly from behind broken skies" Beautifully written.|
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Wow! Another Winner Karla!
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|This is some awesome visuals combined with lots of feeling!!!!
Totally an AWESOME WRITE Karla...I REALLY ENJOYED THIS ONE!!!!
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|You never cease to amaze me with your gift for poetry...
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|This poem is Well Penned and Very Good! Another wonderful storm post,Karla.
I think Eileen was definitely right; storms are your muse.