by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, August 11, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Ride your dreams to the sky. :-)
A challenge is issued to my soul.
I must learn how to forget myself.
New words promise a new adventure.
All I must do is trust and climb on.
I am afraid, I am so afraid,
Because I don't see a safety net.
And what if I fall? Who will catch me?
I'll never know unless I climb on.
I see a Genie on a carpet.
His eyes twinkle in his face like stars.
He tells me that he's glad to see me.
What do you wish for? Tell me, climb on.
Where is it that you would like to go?
What places have you wanted to see?
I will take you anywhere you want.
Your wishes have been granted. Climb on.
The carpet is gorgeous. It looks strong.
All of a sudden, it is airborne!
I discover I am scared of heights.
Why, oh why did I have to climb on?
The Genie takes my hand from my eyes.
He tells me to open up my heart.
My horizons are narrowed by fear.
To expand them, I had to climb on.
The carpet dips between thunderheads.
Lightning sparkles in the Genie's teeth.
Nervously, I reach out and touch him.
It is okay, because I climbed on.
I chase meteors across the sky.
I dance with the brilliant Northern Lights.
Eagles tell me their flying secrets.
So if I fall, I can climb back on.
We laugh and play with tiger kittens.
I can't believe I befriend a shark!
I now have Sasquatch's home address.
I live, because I dared to climb on.
I rope a tornado, break it down.
I bounce off mountains and touch the sun.
I find out I'm rich beyond measure.
And all I had to do was climb on.
(C) Copy written, August 11, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
|Karla...what a mgical set of verses you have written here...Fletcher B|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Karla The Konqueror! This is a gold-medal winner, Karla, and we have travelled the highs and lows of this write with you: the exhileration and the fear! Very well done - you showed those storms and tornados a thing or two - and you trusted your Genie even when his teeth glistened with the threat of lightning! You show us how to overcome - she who dares wins! Excellent write and spirit demonstrated here! Bless you... keep climbing on!!! Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|just climb on...how we do tend to make things harder than they really are, didn't you feel much better by a simple step...now do you have room for me i've been truying to climb mountains...BigSmiles
so glad to read this...lets me know your feeling good
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very well done Karla!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Superb awakening! Glad you finally joined me;-)!
Climb on and Grab on to life for all its worth Karla
its only temporary anyway! Don't let fear of anything
obstruct your view,You have the Supreme one on your side!
Turn fear into energy, by trusting yourself in Him!
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Absolutely right Karla ... AAA+++!!! Spread your wings and fly ... you will go far!
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|You see...once you take your foot off third base you slide on home. Without climbing on....we wouldn't have this delightful poem. Thanks for your bravery. We all win now!
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|this is such an awesome poem and attitude, Karla|
|Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen
|Much truth here. A great read.|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
A ride we'd all like to take! Super piece!
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Very well-done, Karla! Soar on, Poet!|
|Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
|Very enjoyable write with a great message. Keep up the good work!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was wonderful Karla, such a joy to go on that ride with you!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|A parachute is required for flights of fancy herein at the den, and so it seems you do need one for the higher and higher you go, the thinner the air gets, the more you do realize how beautiful life can be...Peace thru Floating on Thin air, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|I'll join you on your magic carpet ride, Karla; sounds like we could all get away! Wonderful write, and I love how your brilliant and creative muse operates! Well done, Karla; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|We all need to climb on Karla..sure would make for some interesting thought patterns.
but now I may have to pass on the friend of a shark thingy!
An awesome tale of fantasy here Karla!
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Climb higher and higher, dear girl...
and keep this positive attitude as long as you can.
You are coming out of the darkness again, and doing
in in lovely fashion. This is most creative!