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Help Meeeeeeeee
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, September 20, 2004
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Ah, the trials and tribulations of being a Poet! :-) *Hee Hee*

"HELP MEEEEEEEEEE"
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Help me find that magic place,
That place where poems dwell,
Help me find the words to use,
That ring louder than a bell,
~~
Help me find that special spark,
That makes someone's thoughts stand out,
Help me find the words to use,
That brings a poem about,
~~
Help me find the highest heights,
Take me from the valley floor,
Help me find the words to use,
Words I've never seen before,
~~
Help me to achieve my dream,
Of seeing my words in print,
Help me find the words to use,
Can you give me a small hint,
~~
Never mind, my Muse is here,
Thought she went down with the ship,
Don't take off like that again!
I was just about to flip!
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(C) Copy written, 20 September, 2004, by Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Safi Abdi	9/23/2004

Creative! Safi




Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)	9/21/2004

Totally cute poem that we can all identify with!




Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang	9/21/2004

Most excellent! Becca




Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)	9/20/2004

Karla, Awesome this one is excellent .... LP




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	9/20/2004

Glad you did not flip...imagine what words could come out of that??? hehehehehehe!! Very creative Karla!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by jude forese	9/20/2004

you seem to have helped yourself just fine ...




Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com	9/20/2004

Honey you don't need any help, it's the rest of the world that needs help. You know exactly what to do, God and your Muse are with you, and that's a tough tag team to defeat! blessin's and ((HUGS)) to you over and over, cynth'ya lewis reed




Reviewed by Dawn Richerson	9/20/2004

I could really identify with that frantic feeling we poets get when the muse takes off... and got a laugh out of the carefree, oh, I've gotta go write now, she's back attitude at the end! Dawn




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	9/20/2004

LOL loved the spin at the end :-)




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	9/20/2004

I think you have found your Muse's place... God Bless Michelle~




Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)	9/20/2004

Karla, I can definately feel the what you are saying in this great poem.




Reviewed by E T Waldron	9/20/2004

Karla you have a forever muse,and your writing improves with each poem!Love it!;-)




Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)	9/20/2004

lol..I think everyone can relate to this! great poem... love&light, Mari




Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz	9/20/2004

You sure have a clever way of bringing that Muse back! I sure liked this one.




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	9/20/2004

Very a-muse-ing.. gotta love this one..




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	9/20/2004

Hi Karla: Your are so talented, you will never be short of words. Your muse is pushing you to write. Sandie May Angel




Reviewed by A PAX	9/20/2004

aahhhhhhhhhhhhh such talent........looking for help??? lady...you can give it.....u got the rhyme all the time.....and the joy of writing along with it, it shows in your humor and style..........your not a trip......your a holiday!!! Anita :)




Reviewed by Lori Moore	9/20/2004

"Never mind, my Muse is here, Thought she went down with the ship, Don't take off like that again! I was just about to flip!" Cute write, Karla. Thanks for the laugh.




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	9/20/2004

Okay you flipped, now if you need help flipping back, I can help there but my muse has eluded me today as well, can't help you with that...Peace as always, Ed & Rufuz




Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)	9/20/2004

Surprise! suwb




Reviewed by Peter Paton	9/20/2004

Wow...You have got the Muse , Karla.. Love and Hugs.. Peter




Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero	9/20/2004

I think you just did it, Karla. Now you want help with... what? Hugs, Carmen :-)




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	9/20/2004

(((Karla))) This is absolutely aDORable! Love your sense of humor! May your muse never abandon you; you are really soaring with your writings! Keep up the great job you are already doing! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry	9/20/2004

really cute d.

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