So Many Poems, So Little Time!
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, September 24, 2004
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"SO MANY POEMS, SO LITTLE TIME!"
So many poems, so little time!
I can't keep up the meter and rhyme!
'Write!" commands this little Muse of mine,
'So what if it doesn't come out fine,
And so I write.
So many poems, so many words!
Flying 'round my head like wing'ed birds!
'Write!' demands this little Muse again,
'I've supplied the words, you have the pen,
And so, I write.
So many poems inside of me!
They're all clamoring to be set free,
'Write!' instructs this little Muse, 'Once more,
You need words? Why, I've got a whole store,
And so, I--write.
So many poems, so little time!
I'm dreaming poems, words most sublime!
'Write!' whispers this little Muse, 'That's it,
You're doing great! Don't stop now, don't quit,
And so...I write.
(C) Copy written, 24 September, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Write On, Write On, Take that pen and fly. Excellant|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|So well expressed, Karla. You are fortunate to have so many poetic gems in your soul. I find that I am inspired only once in a while. Merci pour cette offrande, mon amie. Amour et paix. Régis|
|Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Why we write: because we have words that have to get OUT, or else we'll go MAD!! LOL
Wonderful write that captures the very essence of what we writers face each and every day! Well done, Karla; BRAVA! May your pen always flow!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
|Day after day,
I think that I might
Sit at my desk
and write, write, write.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very demanding and delightful read I say!!
Write sister write your heart out!!
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
You expressed this so well precious friend. An original and witty poem. Your meter and rhyme were great btw.
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Karla, this is a delightful and enjoyable write. You did capture the muse within on this one....fantastic.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|YOu have the soul of a poet Karla! Wonderful!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|You have captured the obsession of the writer quite well in this write.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|This one is excellent keep that muse busy sweetie.
HUGS always prayers wanted to stop by./
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Now This More Like Karla I Know Who Is Strong Inside-
YOU BET,Keep On Writing Until The End Of Time For Even (God ) Always Knows Even Life Must Rhyme With All Thats Is Good,Gracious,Compassion,i.e. For Love Of (God) Is For The Love Of (His) Little (Now) Children!
Save a Child SAVE YOUR (Soul) Self!
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Now just look at the beautiful piece you created,
by being obedient to your Muse!
Loved it, Karla!!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|and write well you do indeed!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Karla, I may need to borrow your Muse! Nah! You two do a great job together...
Thanks Karla for the smiles!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Geez wish I thought of this, or maybe i did, but you are reading my mind...?! Sorry have to up my meds, paranoia, LOL! This is really cute, Karla...Peace, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)
|Reviewed by A PAX
I call mine.....my ghost.........
that voice........oh she is persistant......and i am glad she decieded to nag you ........because you are a fantastic team........
this is wonderful.......saving it!! pax A
my son is ok, haven't heard from him in awhile tho, he did send me a package from Afganisthan, it contained a lapis chest board, along with 2 lapis lions, and a soft ball sized chunk of lapis.......no note.......i have no idea what i am supposed to do with it......but it was great to hear "SOMETHING" from him.......ty for the continued prayers.......you are so wonderful and sweet!!!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|You always can pen a stunner of a poem...and laced with humour as well , Karla..
Love and Hugs
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Ha! Karla, me sweet, we hear the same voices, you and I... hmmmm... 'siamese schizophrenics?' (grin) Ah, yes, I can make light of this, having a son who actually DOES have schizophrenia and gave me permission, after he quit rolling on the floor, laughing at his loony mother!
I think you and I may be joined at the psyche... from my head to your gloriously clever delivery. "Write!" Snotty, demanding little imp, ain't he? (giggle). I've been known to glaze over, suddenly running from a chat, to regurgitate words to paper. Like birth, they WILL be born! You've tickled AND floored me with your fabulous wit. katy xox.
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Oh how I adore that little muse of yours, you certainly can write them, never stop Karla, this was absolutely wonderful and the picture is just superb. Thanks for sharing, hey, won't you send the little muse over for a while, I could do with some help :)
warm hugs and love your friend in SA
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Karla excellent as always, keep that pen moving