|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|' When my heart gives out, do not resuscitate it with tears and rave reviews of how good I was. Tell me the truth while I am still alive'----- I'm telling YOU the truth that I like YOUR sentences!!!!!!! ' Words are of no use to a dead POET' VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
|There's truth in there somewhere; deep--mind's eye view. Emotional, Questionable, is this how deep & wide the poet (I'm just getting the hang of it! :)))))) It is good but the sparkle in your eyes, I don't see the gloom.
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
The quintessential poetic write about poets - superbly stunning my friend!!
|Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen
|WOW, Karla! This poem really hit home with me. I like this line: "Tell me the truth while I am still alive". YES, yes, and finally...YES!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A bookstore would make a nice tomb - I believe it would; but please don't be in a hurry to get there.|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|An amazing poem that touched me deeply.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Or as Spike has on his. "I told you I was ill"
Very talented write.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Love it...wonderful write..|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|What a perfect place to spend eternity, a book store, or library, haunting the living and reading forever...Ed|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh Yeah...nice thought!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|this is great ... luv it!|
|Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
|Sounds good, Karla! Wonderful wishes...|
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|When the poet leaves, the words will always live on!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Comforting, even in death. May the word live on!|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Well done Karla! Sounds like a good plan. : )
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Yep William is right I would echo his sentiment. No she does not lack talent.|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|You've solve a problem for me; my will is going to specify that my ashes will lie along copies of my book(s) - with your poem displayed in big letters so my work will keep on selling! - Bill|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Karla you are becoming a poeite poet! (my word;-)
Very creative finely done mz wordsmith!
|Reviewed by Pier Tyler
|I like this...
(Let my last breath be drawn from a well of ink.
That way, I can make my final mark on the
Page. Everyone will know a Poet lived here.)
This is so moving. It touches writers and non-writers
who want something that say, yes, I was here.
This is a splendid write.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Hope this isn't for a very looooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time! Deep and meaningful write that speaks volumes! EXCELLENT, excellent job; BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|A deep meanigful write Karla, really well structured...Excellent.
You certainly don't lack talent.
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Great write Karla