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Good Morning! :-)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, January 26, 2005
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Don't I wish! :-)

I lay in luxurient fields of green
Getting drunk on the aroma of you
Your loveliness far exceeds the sunlight
As we make love on a carpet of dew

You whisper secret kisses in my ears
I eagerly anticipate each one
This is the way to begin the morning
Lying naked, together, 'neath the sun

The earth tilts and collapses on itself
We scale the heights of passion one more time
We drift back down on gentle songs of love
While our hearts synchronize in perfect rhyme

(C) Copy written, 26 January, 2005, by Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	1/27/2005

Great write Karla God Bless Michelle!




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	1/27/2005

Stunning work KArla!! Goodmorning?afternoon....lol!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU	1/27/2005

A sublime depicting... "Good Morning! :-)" flows from the fountain of libidinal energy to the central station of life's power. Enjoyable reading from an inspiring poetic grand. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	1/26/2005

Don't I wish....lovely, sensual write Hugs, Carole




Reviewed by Dave Harm	1/26/2005

Very romantic and sensual... dreaming of your cruise?




Reviewed by John Bidwell	1/26/2005

Don't we all wish...Wow. This is the dream alright, perfectly captured. John




Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)	1/26/2005

Boy Karla you really shone on this one.




Reviewed by Larry Rochelle	1/26/2005

So nicely done, it's painful.




Reviewed by Paul Williams	1/26/2005

Wonderfully romantic Karla it has a gentleness all of its own. Paul;-}




Reviewed by ~ Chanti	1/26/2005

Dear Karla, What a sensual romantic poem, brimming with love and passion. Excellent! Thanks so much for your kind reviews of my poetry. You are always so encouraging. You have a beautiful heart sweet friend. Love Chanti




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	1/26/2005

'neath the sun, you get a burnt bum.. Loved this, I used the same pic' somewhere? You can write anything...Good show Kruisin' Karla..




Reviewed by George Jackson	1/26/2005

Wow, Karla, you should write more of these...and I loved the picture, too.




Reviewed by E T Waldron	1/26/2005

Karla wonderful romantic sensual treat from you! You don't do them often , but when you do wow! love,eileen




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	1/26/2005

(((Kruisin' Karla))) YIKES! Feeling a tad frisky, are we now?..or are you just looking forward to your CRUISE?? LOL Wonderfully playful write; thanks for sharing; well done! BRAVA!! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by E. Richardson	1/26/2005

!!! mercy!!!...heheheheh...methinks you been a reading LaBelle a lot...Lady Buckeye, this is really good.

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