by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Tuesday, February 21, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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have only been of you -
you looked in my embrace;
in your delicate sighs;
when you left this morning.
we're together again,
and we have the whole night
reacquainted once more.
you want it as bad as
I do ...
I can see it in the way
out of your clothes and put
sexiest negligee -
my darling, I'm ready
all of your dreams come true .
the time doing what we
do best -
putting the day to bed. :)
(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
Daddy's been cleared for surgery; scheduled for Thursday morning. Thanks for all of the prayers. :)
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|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow Karla how do you slip inside a man's head so easily and capture his desires and thoughts. Wonderful write with just the right amount of healthy lust kicked in.
Glad to hear about your Dad.
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Absolutely lovely! Love the good news about your Daddy too!Our best wishes and prayers for his big day Thursday!
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by J M
|Endig superb Karla I enjoyed reading this tender poem so simple but expressed so well. :)|
|Reviewed by Only A Poet
|very erotic and romantic, Sweet Lady. enjoyed. hope all goes well with your father.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Couldn't tell if this first-person poem was directed at you, or you directing it at the picture. LOL Still, whatever, the poem itself was/is very nice. Great news about your father.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Well now, Karla--wonder what you were thinking about when you wrote this fun poem! LOL This poem and the picture ROCKS! BRAVA; a job very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh get ready ..bed time...lol!!
Well done You Naughty minded you!!
Tell Dad I say good luck....and he is in my prayers sis!!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|I echo the sentiments of the board Karla, and am praying for your Dad's full recovery from surgery, and restoration to full fitness and health again !
The poem and pic sizzles !
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Sensuous write, Karla! Nice poem to put us to bed. Wishing your daddy a very speedy recovery after the surgery. Tell Karen I said that goes ditto!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|I hope everything goes well with your dad.
You take care too.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|wow, this one sizzles Karla!...prayers for your dad
love and peace...Carole
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Is that a self-portrait picture, Karla, don't let daddy see it before surgery...luck to him...Ed|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|How sweet it is ms sexy;-)perfect finish to the day...glad for news of dad!Thanks...