Achy Breaky Body (For dreamweaver)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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being in pain twenty four seven
(ain't been no gift)
wasn't sent from God up in Heaven
i've give one day to be pain free
(to see what i've missed)
but BAM!! i'm facin' reality
i wake up hurting, there's a pain in my head
(great way to begin)
but i have to work can't stay in bed
OUCH, my neck hurts, it's all stiff and sore
(really hurts to move)
ain't nothin' new, i've felt THIS before
let's not even talk about my back
(it started this mess)
it creaks, it grinds, it even goes *CRACK*
feel like i'm comin' down with the flu
(thought i got the shot!!)
muscles ache, my joints sympathize too
docs think I'm crazy, losing my mind
(ya think I like this??)
If they had this, a cure they would find!!!
next time i gripe, next time i complain
(please just understand)
it's not you i'm mad at...it's the pain
dedicated with love to dreamweaver
and to any and all of us that are living
with pain...physical, emotional...pain
this just popped into my head after
i e-mailed dreamweaver. had to write
it down as it came to me...
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|Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
|Yeah, it's well stated and should stir up the mind of people who tend to ignore the impact of things that are not part of their own experience (which is a common trait in people, isn't it).
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|what a cute write!! let us keep melanie in our prayers; she needs em!! love, your twin, karen lynn. :) (((HUGS)))|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|what a wonderful gesture and a really good write....pain is pain very well said|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Well done Karla...very thoughtful of you...|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Some Thing's You Can Do For Physical Pain:
Drink a Table Spoon Or More Of White Vinegar each Day To Kill It___
Whence You Go To Sleep Talk To Yourself & Tell Yourself As You're Dozing off; I Am Free From All(Mental) Pain___
You can Read about The above & More in My
|Reviewed by Justin Wolf (Reader)
|hey, I think we all know where you're coming from. Good expression, good rhyme scheme. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|I know what you mean. I as in a car accident
believe it or not a tree fell on my car while
I was driving. some days the pain is tolorable other days it is intense.
Of course I could have read this wrong and you were writing about dreamweaver.
if that is the case then
but great write
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Am working on an e-mail for ya hun.. LOL This is cute, and oh too true. Thanks!
Love and Light