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Achy Breaky Body (For dreamweaver)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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being in pain twenty four seven
(ain't been no gift)
wasn't sent from God up in Heaven

i've give one day to be pain free
(to see what i've missed)
but BAM!! i'm facin' reality

i wake up hurting, there's a pain in my head
(great way to begin)
but i have to work can't stay in bed

OUCH, my neck hurts, it's all stiff and sore
(really hurts to move)
ain't nothin' new, i've felt THIS before

let's not even talk about my back
(it started this mess)
it creaks, it grinds, it even goes *CRACK*

feel like i'm comin' down with the flu
(thought i got the shot!!)
muscles ache, my joints sympathize too

docs think I'm crazy, losing my mind
(ya think I like this??)
If they had this, a cure they would find!!!

next time i gripe, next time i complain
(please just understand)
it's not you i'm mad's the pain

dedicated with love to dreamweaver
and to any and all of us that are living
with pain...physical, emotional...pain
is pain.

this just popped into my head after
i e-mailed dreamweaver. had to write
it down as it came to me...

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Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi 7/24/2007
Yeah, it's well stated and should stir up the mind of people who tend to ignore the impact of things that are not part of their own experience (which is a common trait in people, isn't it).
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/24/2002
what a cute write!! let us keep melanie in our prayers; she needs em!! love, your twin, karen lynn. :) (((HUGS)))
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 6/2/2002
what a wonderful gesture and a really good write....pain is pain very well said
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/1/2002
Well done Karla...very thoughtful of you...
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 6/1/2002

Some Thing's You Can Do For Physical Pain:

Drink a Table Spoon Or More Of White Vinegar each Day To Kill It___

Whence You Go To Sleep Talk To Yourself & Tell Yourself As You're Dozing off; I Am Free From All(Mental) Pain___

You can Read about The above & More in My
Published Books!

Reviewed by Justin Wolf (Reader) 6/1/2002
hey, I think we all know where you're coming from. Good expression, good rhyme scheme. Bravo.
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) 6/1/2002
I know what you mean. I as in a car accident
believe it or not a tree fell on my car while
I was driving. some days the pain is tolorable other days it is intense.
Of course I could have read this wrong and you were writing about dreamweaver.
if that is the case then
Never Mind:
but great write
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 6/1/2002
Namaste Karla;
Am working on an e-mail for ya hun.. LOL This is cute, and oh too true. Thanks!
Love and Light

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