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1st of the Month
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Thursday, October 05, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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:) Too bad my first of the month doesn't last past the second. :) Oh, well........

No matter the weather
inside the heart it is
It's the first of the month,
when they
have money in pocket;
for the
moment, they feel/are rich -
they're not
worried about bills or
the rain...
it's a
very good day, today.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.   (10/5)

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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 10/23/2008

Always written from your heart . . . always exceptional!!


Reviewed by Axilea MU 11/20/2007
Simple and to the point. Life is also made of precise moments, of living in the present.

Warmest best,

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/8/2006
I love your attitude, Karla. Thanks for this. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/6/2006
Drives one bonkers, doesn't it? I am so sorry you have to go through this! Very well penned poem!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by Paul Berube 10/6/2006
I often wondered why they say money burns a hole in ones pocket.
Half the time it never gets that far. Good one my friend.
Reviewed by William Bonilla 10/5/2006
So true ..Karla
I worry about no bills
let the bills worry about me

Love & Peace
Reviewed by jude forese 10/5/2006
i get paid bi-monthly, so i go through this twice a month ;)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/5/2006
Reviewed by P. Michaels 10/5/2006
I can identify with this one, Karla. That first of the month income doesn't cover it all. Does it? Life is just one big struggle. Two incomes would help, right? We have to just keep on thinking that its 'very good day, today' and be thankful for what we have, right? I enjoyed your poem.

Best wishes and prayers.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 10/5/2006
Karla my first does not last long enough with rent, and bills, but it is true for a moment we are allowed to feel rich, and I thank God that despite the struggles I have a place to rest my head at night, and I am rich in not the montetary sense but in what really matters
God Bless
Reviewed by H. Lena Jones 10/5/2006
Cute, Karla! :)

God Bless
Love, Lena
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 10/5/2006
Cute poem...very true...I think we can all relate.
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by J M 10/5/2006
A cheerful attitude makes one feel every day good wether or weather not...
Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow 10/5/2006
I get to wait until the third Sure doesn't last long...

Reviewed by Peter Paton 10/5/2006

It's a never ending cycle
Try the Powerball, you might strike it Lucky !!


Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 10/5/2006
Are we all living from hand to mouth? You bet we are. Lovely poem, Victor
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 10/5/2006
First of the month a ray of hope shining in the heart of the AD. Your brother in Africa
Reviewed by CJ Heck 10/5/2006
This is a fun poem, Karla -- you've kinda summed it up for most of us on the planet (giggling).
Many hugs,
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/5/2006
So true to the bone this one is, it is such a nice feeling when the bills are paid and you look into your account and say yea there is even a few dollars left for me.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 10/5/2006

Mind's striking composition... "1st of the Month" glows.

Helathy long creative life, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by richard cederberg 10/5/2006
And I am glad to hear this positive declaration dear Karla.

It's like I always say: "Before the paycheck arrives, it's already spent."

I am sincerely glad that this is a good day for you.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/5/2006
lol....mine only last for one day too...and after the bills are paid I am deeper into the red!!

Love Tinka

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