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Toy Soldier
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Tuesday, January 16, 2007
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This woke me up in the middle of the night. God bless our men and women in uniform...

Frozen in place, keyed to march,
To defend when ordered. Think
In that uniform of starch
Fashioned, there could be a chink
-----like feelings? A heart, perhaps??
Weary of the game of war,
Of hearing the haunted 'Taps'
Bugled one more time. Before
It tolls for him, he stuffs fear
Within his breast, soldiers on-----
Strong. Tough. There's no room for tears
Or mourning. And, come the dawn,
He marches towards his death,
Giving his all: His last breath.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (1/16)

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Reviewed by Daring Sunshine	1/21/2007

The bravery of our soldiers who give their lives, sacrifice! Thank them often, again & again. Great tribute! LOL Sharon




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	1/18/2007

It is very sad that this world still finds the need for soldiers; no one should have to put his/her life in jeopardy for reasons of war if we had evolved at all from ancient times. Thank you, Karla. Love and peace, Regis




Reviewed by H. Lena Jones	1/17/2007

For God and country is his cry...a vow he made and intends to keep! We are truly blessed to have brave men as these. Where would we be without them? God bless soldiers everywhere who defend the rights of others. An inspired write, Karla. Well Done! Love always Lena




Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson	1/17/2007

Well done karla.. Your friend, Ron




Reviewed by Phillip William Allen	1/17/2007

A pen on the life of but one who honored his forefathers dedication to him.




Reviewed by jude forese	1/16/2007

your nobly capture the spirit of the soldier in this poem ...




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	1/16/2007

Powerful statement, Karla!!!!! This feelings could be soooo true!!!!!! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)




Reviewed by Sherry Heim	1/16/2007

So is the life of the soldier. Most of the soldiers I have known have admitted that they don't wish to die for what they believe but that they have little problem putting themselves in the position that it could happen. They are noble and far stronger than I could ever hope to be. I am humbled by their sacrifices and awed by their commitment. Powerful Poem! Take care, Sherry




Reviewed by Joyce Bowling	1/16/2007

Ooh, such a powerful and beautiful write, haunting but truthful. Great write my friend, you've brought tears to my eyes, but pride to my heart for our country and our troops. Blessings, Joyce Bowling




Reviewed by Susan de Vegter	1/16/2007

This brings chills to me and tears for the spirit that endures this test of bravery to continue on another day. Thank you. Love, Susan




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	1/16/2007

Powerful write Karla may the Lord bless our Troops GOD BLESS MICHELLE~




Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)	1/16/2007

And the truth marches on with these dear brave souls.




Reviewed by Debra Kraft	1/16/2007

So sadly true, so hauntingly stated. Powerful.




Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels	1/16/2007

Sad but so real I agree...nice work!




Reviewed by Felix Perry	1/16/2007

Stark, sad but real. Well done and a great format here. Fee




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	1/16/2007

Great sentiments about the troops. When I was on base here the lads use their humour a lot, just to get by. Time to bring the boys home..




Reviewed by Rusty Daily	1/16/2007

There is no one, I repeat no one, more special than those who would risk their life for the well-being of another. IMHO Rusty




Reviewed by CJ Heck	1/16/2007

This is a little too close to my feelings, but I have to say it's a wonderful poem, Karla -- you did a remarkable write about our soldiers. Love, CJ




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	1/16/2007

Powerful tribute to our fightin' men and women; God bless 'em! And God bless you too, Karla; sobering, unflinching write on how it is for them! Very well done; brava! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(




Reviewed by Beryl McMullen	1/16/2007

Beautifully written and how true your poem Karla It is the soldier that gives us freedom the soldier every time




Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)	1/16/2007

A great tribute to the American soldier. love your deep patriotic feelings. Thanks dear sister/friend




Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader)	1/16/2007

this is a very good reminder to us of the sacrifice they are willing to make each day while we are safe and warm. Susan

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